RSQViper's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Saw Dust]

Pretty Good

It really made no sense at first and it wasn't obvious this was going to be a comedy until close to the end when the doll started talking.

But, it was pretty funny at the end with the pony on a stick being the booby trap.

[Nightmare Coal Clock]

Totally Awesome

This was so great, man. You used a TON of frame by frame and though it was somewhat simple graphics, it didn't matter. You kept me totally into the Flash.

The voices were great, the story was really cool and believable (for a ghost story) and the only thing I can say is fix your replay button HIT area. In the HIT frame on a button you decide what area people will click, so make a big filled-in square that encompasses "REPLAY" and people won't have to click on the little lines you used to write it.

Great job, man! Oh, also, often I could see the white background at the edges. Maybe fix that, too?

[Dungeons&Dragons- trailer]

Looks OK

The animation was VERY iffy. When you had the guy walking to the door he was skipping around a bit. Also, the dragon was tough to tell it was a dragon because of the white on white.

The fire was done well, though and you used great music to set it up.

ervitz responds:

there will be alot more frame by frame in the series. and the skipping is because i used a graphic symbol instead of a movieclip symbol for the walking animation inside the symbol.
thanks for your comment

[Fuera Chavez! 2]

Not Impressed

It was just words streaming thru in Spanish. No animation or anything else, so it was no fun to watch.

Sorry, bu this was a poor submission.

[49 Days of the Week Ep.1]

hehe

Was that guy sleeping with a hat on? Or was that not a hat?

Anyway, the animation was pretty good and the graphics all seemed to fit alright. But your story was disjointed and it was a bit slow. The slowness may have been because of the song you used. It was pretty annoying as it was just repeating itself over and over.

Anyway, overall a decent toon.

MagicTree responds:

It was a Beanie, and he's sorta a bum so yeah he sleeps in it. yeah i couldn't think what other songs to use for that episode.

[Overtime - Jatkoaika]

Really Great

The style used in this movie has GOT to be tough. You constantly moved parts and made it fluid. When she was in that contraption with the strings, that had to be a logistical nightmare.

GREAT job on the animation.

The story was also great. You told it well and used no words. It was also very, VERY odd, but that was great since you never really knew what to expect.

The little mini game was funny, too. I didn't realize at first that's what was going on.

Just great.

[Browser Battles]

Good

Well, the camera work was very good. The lip sync was good, too, but as for movement, there really was none. It was all lip sync. =(

The jokes were decent, but the way it ended seemed more like you ran out of ideas vice that's how you wanted it to end. The voice also changed at the end, but it was still clear.

Overall good. I liked and enjoyed it. Try to build from this movie.

ShortMonkey responds:

I may make a sequel with actual fighting... but then again... I may not. :)