RSQViper's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Pink To Be Square]

Simple, but funny.

I liked the animation. Really smooth. It was also funny at the end. You had a good look on his face and he really had a mess made out of himself.

Nice job.

Metalcan responds:

Thanks a lot, glad you liked it!

[Wolfenstein 3D Headshot]

Kinda Funny

Well, the audio wasn't too hilarious, but it had it's moments.

The one thing that really confused me is why you never, or at least rarely, lined up the kills. Most of the time they weren't even close to in-line with the shot and the shot really would have hit the wall.

Anyway, it was ok.

DuDuL responds:

Couse it was in old games like that
Doom
Wolfenstein 3D
Duke Nukem 3D

You never played those?

[Clayground - Dentist]

What Changed? Nothing.

Well, even though you didn't seem to change a thing, I liked it yesterday and I like it today.

I still say when you are singing that it's too quiet and the sound drowns out the words in places. Possibly because you mumbled a lot during the song.

Still, it was funny and everyone dies. It's always good when everyone in the movie dies.

Nice job. =)

BlakTornado responds:

I had a cold when I recorded :( lol.

But thanks :)

I did try to make the vocals in the song louder, though.

[Sleeping lady]

Keep Working At It

Your graphics are impressive and it's obvious you're new to Flash.

Things to keep in mind:

- Stay aware of your backgrounds. Put them all on one layer and put nothing on top of them. Move things around on other layers. This will keep your background from moving when it shouldn't.

- Keep your backgrounds covering the ENTIRE viewing area. Many times I could see on the sides of your backgrounds.

- Animate at a higher frame rate and use tweens when you need to as moving the same symbol around makes it choppy when it should be smooth.

[A Wizard Creates]

Very Cool

That was short and sweet adn made very well.

I like the music you chose, it went very well with the Flash.

Also, the drawing and animation was superb.

[To The Brim Of Existence]

Those A-Holes Don't Know What They're Missing!

I lied this a lot. It was funny, the music was funny and the graphics were pretty good. Animation was smooth, too.

5/5 10/10!

boinky33 responds:

SHUT THE HELL UP!

[Giant Pumpkin]

Cool, Man

It wasn't the BEST thing ever, but it was creative and creativeness is very important.

Not a huge fan of those endings, though. VERY tired of that "END" voice.

Very nice overall. I liked it.

[Blow The Whistle!]

This is GREAT

Reminds me a lot of the Blow My Whistle original, but this exceeds it by far.

I also REALLY like the garbage whistle transformer. VERY cool!

Tom should shrink this and use it for when we blow the whistle. =)

Androu1 responds:

Wow.Thanks,good to see someone liked the garbage whistle transformer! Noone hasn't noticed the garbage whistle di--woops,I said too much :P

And,if Tom would use it,I would think my life is full!! (well,not really,but it would make me fucking happy! :)

[Bowl of Soup]

Sick and Funny

This was really gross and disturbing, but damned funny. You sure didn't seem to hold back... hehehe

Nice job!

(I was actually about to heat up some soup, but now... I think I won't)

JunkYardAnimations responds:

lmao, i hope i havent scarred you for life so that you'll never eat soup again

[The Beat.]

Alright...

The graphical DRAWING was great, but the animation was messed up pretty bad.

You shape tweened the hair and it made parts of it disappear and leave the outlines which was VERY strange. It totally had me staring at their hair as it kept flickering in and out.

Drawings: great
Animation: distractingly bad

It would have been great if it wasn't for that.