RSQViper's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Most Horrible Story]

Holy Crap, NOOO!!!

No Sunny D!?!? That's TERRIBLE!!!

Johnny is going to be ruined for life now. POor kid.

Nice animation! Interesting style that worked well with the mind-fuck of a story.

Congrats on front page, too!

[*Numb*]

Good.

It was good at first, but it was basically a long lip sync test. What I mean by that is there wasn't a lot going on. It was the Tankman being lip sync'd, Pico and Pico's legs walking. The BG changed, but looped.

With a critical eye I see that you need to practice your lip syncing. I saw a lot of, maybe not so much mistakes, but misses. You were using the (V,F) mouth for too many things. Like, you used it for (M) and (B) because you didn't make an (M) or (B).

You need to make the following mouths for all your lip syncing:
F,V
ahhh
A
eh
E
zzz (this one you had and were using for E)
M (flat mouth)
p (flat, short mouth)
SS (you can usually get away using E or zzz for this one, depending on your character)
Oh, oo

Once you get your arsenal it actually makes lip syncing easier.

=)

ShortMonkey responds:

Cheers, I'll work on my lipsync.

[Just Rad]

Nice Music

There wasn't a ton to watch since it repeated a lot, but it went really well with the music. The graphics were pretty good and the animation was pretty good as well.

Unfortunately as soon as I was getting into it, it was over. =(

ShortMonkey responds:

lol... shoulda made it longer, eh? :)

[Tribute to a Hero]

Something Wrong

I remember this was some sort of slide show with little effort put into it, but now it's just a 0.1 KB black and white flashing screen.

So, since it's not enjoyable at all now it definitely hurts the score. Please fix it. =)

[HIT THAT!]

Well, I like this as usual

I haven't seen your stuff since "Get a God" but this is great. Glad you got frontpage.

The voicing was great as was how you clipped it into the Flash. Nice job. I reall ylike your ending, too how it ended suddenly in the middle of a word.

Great job, well-deserved attention.

[Mister Moto]

Just OK

It's a pretty plain movie. The song is mostly annoying and you have too much white background.

For the most part it was just tweening the same BMP and movie clip around the screen, not much else.

It had less redeeming qualities than poor qualities, but it was somewhat entertaining.

[One Story to the Next]

Nicely Done

This is some great animation.

I think that it was pretty funny and you had some good graphics as well.

I would say that the floating part was dragged out just a little too long, but you kept it funny.

Also, that is one hell of an elevator, let me tell you.

[Peyote Jesus]

Definitely Odd

Peyote Jesus. Wow. So this is what being on Peyote is like, I guess?

This Flash was definitely whacked-out, but I do feel you used too much white background. Your actual backgrounds were great. Using the white less would have been more effective.

Also, the beginning was good, but that whole middle was dragged out too much.

The voice was ok, but the recording was odd.

Neurrorist responds:

not exactly, peyote involves a lot more vomitting and unabashed weeping
we ran the narration through a couple of effects on guitar rig hence the other roomly quality
thanks for the critique
it was my first, and looking back, I think I would have made the middle more....trippy
but I stand by my white deconstruction of the world
thank you again

[Piggy Back Stack]

A piggy back, huh?

Well, your animation is alright, though there was not much to animate.

What gets me is the joke. It was pretty bad. Like, if this came to my mind I definitely wouldn't put it into a Flash, yikes.

I'd say instead of pushing to think of something to make a Flash about, write something down that comes to you out of the blue, then make THAT into a Flash. It'll be better.

Good luck.

POWZA responds:

ok i will

[Cuboy Ep.2]

Great

Well, this was awesome again. I htink I liked the story better in the first episode, but this one you went another step in animation.

Some of the things you pulled off were quite impressive. If I animated this I would have stopped in frustration and anger. lol.

Nice job! I really like the Cuboy Series.