RSQViper's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[My Way]

Finished Product?

What I saw was funny, and entertaining, but you've GOT to finish this song, man. And add some simple background.

Nice job, just finish it out.

[Metroid Prime Catastrophe]

Nice Job

I like the movie. Funny little story line and good animation.

Something was messed up at the beginning. I had to click the SS button to get past the beginning as it just froze up there.

Shadowii2 responds:

Oh, sorry, Im gonna fix that big now

[Fur Hundr3d Th0us4nd]

400,000

As epic as the 400,000th Flash is for NG, this isn't a very good example of Flash. It's too bad you didn't put something here that was a lot better.

As this was, it was just yelling and screaming into a mic and a penis drawn on the screen. Not my idea of a good Flash.

Muffin responds:

research has proven this is what newgrounds want. IT'S SCIENCE!!

[Halo The Toy Movie]

Cool

I think it was a great attempt. It was pretty entertaining for as short as it was and I like how you used Flash effects on top of the video. They were also pretty decent effects vice other similar attempts I've seen.

I do think you would benefit from a higher stop-motion FPS. The movement was a bit choppy.

Nice job overall.

davideo7 responds:

Yeah I agree, it is a little choppy, my next video's wont be as choppy. And thanks veyr much for the compliments.

[Puppets to Fate]

Lost Attempt

Well, I can't say I wasn't disappointed in this movie because I was.

Whatever it was you were trying to get across was lost to me. The main actor was pretty annoying and if you were trying to make people laugh I couldn't tell. It was tough if this was supposed to be a serious movie at times or if it was a comedy.

Also, you could have cut a LOT out of this thing. You really dragged out some scenes. I think if it was shorter it would have been better. We stared at that overgrown hairdryer for quite a while in the beginning, then watched this dude cry for what seemed like forever.

Hopefully if there's another it will be better.

[FBF short]

Makeit into something

The graphics and animation are great, but this is more of a practice/demo reel than a movie. NG is for MOVIES and GAMES, not these little demos.

I think you have what it takes, now make it INTO something. It WILL pass if it's like this.

Best of luck!

hardy-727 responds:

Yeah, i know what you mean, thxz for review

[Animal's student -ep02-]

Good Animation, Poor English

Your animation is very good, but your representation of the English language is pretty bad. You should have a native English speaking person edit these before you release into the English speaking world.

[NG Girl (Promiscuous)]

Nice

Definitely some cool effects. Looks like you used rotoscoping to get them, but then added those effects on the drawing which made for a smooth animation. My only complain is that you shortcutted out of the movie by using the words and frozen frame at the end and not finishing the song.

Maybe add to it with different people?

And who dd you use as the model? A video, a friend, yourself? Nice job.

[Naruto: deidara owned]

Not Bad

Definitely some decent animation using tweens for a new artist, but it's really WAY too short and you need to compress the audio. 9.2MB is far too large for this. It should be no larger than 2MB and THAT'S pretty big.

Also, your preloader is screwed up a bit. Somehow you have it on a couple frames making it have issues. It's a good idea to let the NG preloader stand on its own on ONE frame until you learn more.

Decent graphics as well. Keep trying and add to this.

[Revenge of the Ninja]

Took a while to get going

Although it started slow, it picked up and was really good.

Also huge props for using music from "Shadow of the Ninja", one of my favorite all-time games.

And nice idea using the big "N" and spellin gout "ninja", that was a cool effect.