RSQViper's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[''magic world'']

AGAIN???

This is the second time today YOU have submitted this. Stop it.

You already HAVE it here on newgrounds, what is the issue?

It's good, but not so good we need it here 100 times.

[TP Spells 4chan]

Very Funny

This was great. Your comedy was so different from spot to spot, but it worked well together.

The story was really good, the animation was smooth and the jokes ket coming.

Well done!

[SleepEasy]

Very Fun Watch

This was a lot of fun to watch, man.

I like the dream sequencing at the beginning and how places changed to other places like dreams often do. Also, the stars were an awesome effect!

Great writing and animating!

RupeeClock responds:

The stars were a surprisingly easy effect as well, it's just a movieclip inside a movie clip inside a movie clip, one movieclip stretching or rotating another. :)

[Searching for Hope intro]

Not TOO bad...

You definitely need to do a little homework before you start making these.

Like, your bullet you used was the bullet AND the casing. The casing generally ejects at the gun and is never fired. Only the bullet is fired.

The story looks like it could be decent, so good luck with that.

You also need to use stopallsounds and the end of your movie so it doesn't continue into the beginning.

FlamingMoose responds:

welll I fixed the sound problem before I submitted it but apparently the updated version wasn t the oen submitted so it makes me look totally inexperienced lol. And sorry I REALLY don t know much about guns and bullets but I will try to find out more if I dare do more close up shots. And have a casing fall from the gun. Thanks for the feedback and constructive critisizzim.

[Fight Club Compilation]

Nicely Done

You use blur very well. It certainly adds to your movie instead of using it like a crutch like many artists do.

The action was well-done and you have a good flow for action.

[Jay Short # 2!]

EH?

It was funny sand all over the place to some odd music.

I liked it.

TheCriminalDuder responds:

Thank ye.