RSQViper's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[UnaPalabra]

Just OK

The song was pretty boring and drolling. It was ok in the fact that it fit the Flash itself, though.

The graphics were very plain. The drawing you used at the end was good, though, but the animation on it was done badly. What I mean by that is, when you moved something, you left its ghost behind it, so where it was became a blank spot on the drawing. That is poor animation.

There were some cool effects you used with the lines. I actually thought it would have been better if you just used the lines and the drawing at the end.

Some effects you used were very odd. Like the jumping around of that paragraph. That was really bad and annoying. It got in the way more than helped your movie.

This was just a PAR movie, but effort went into it and I hope to see you improve. I'm pretty sure it will pass judgement as well as it is somewhat original and shows a promising artist behind it.

2/5, work hard and improve. Learn from this Flash.

newtalonhardin responds:

:-D Thank you very much for the detailed review...With that in mind, I am sure i will do better.

[TANKMEN]

Very Funny

That was a really good Flash.

The graphics were really simple, but very cool. The animation was very smooth, the voice acting was GREAT and the writing was hilarious.

3 Hour Truce for Titanic! Heh heh.

[Weird Tales #2]

BAD MESSAGE

Suicide isn't something to be encouraged at all, man.

It's not cool or funny.

The animation was ok, it was too short.

For those that think it's cool to commit suicide, remember this: Your life does not just effect you!

[The Tragic Banana]

Not Good

Overall it was bad. It was barely animated and all it reall ywas, was reading a letter.

Fortunately, like the banana, no one will miss this either.

[FLCLNX]

Ok

That was ok, but it honestly got a bit boring. I actually yawned at one point.

You put a lot of work into it though, so I gave you a 4/5.

Cloud-Orion responds:

it is a bit bland. Meant to only spend a little bit of time on it and move on, but...school is hard and time consuming.

[Shadow of the killer]

ISSUES

Your mic is terrible. I had to stop it. It HURTS my ears with that whistle. Record either on a quieter setting, get a new mic, or get someone to Voice Act for you.

You had no preloader either and you need one. It free and on NG, no excuses.

Another issue is the fact that the beginning was very slow and boring. For a while I thought it would be just the letters because it took too long. Find a better and faster way to do that.

Just fix it. It's promising.

IeatPUSSY responds:

that was a chick doing the voice lol. was not me. it was me at the end. the who are you. the rest is a a chick

[Sonic Oddball Crackups 2]

What a great Flash

This was totally funny!

Breakdown:

Graphics: 8. Very well-done with the sprites. Professional and clean. You used zooming in and out very well, also without blurring anything.

Style: 9. Smooth animation. Very seamless, I ever noticed any real glitches.

Sound: 8. Some things were louder than others, but EVERYTHING was clear.

Violence: 5. Not a ton of violence, but that's fine as there's no need. What there was was very well-done.

Interactivity: 8. I like how I can go back and choose each, individual "crackup". Most people don't do that and that is very appreciated.

Humor: 8. It was quite funny and had me laughing quite a bit. The Star Trek thing was hilarious. "KHAN!!!!"

Overall: 9. Great Flash. One of the best sprites I've seen. Something to be proud of.

Great job! 5/5

[Star Wars Special Edition]

Great Movie

I know that was a ton of work right there with as many times as you changed scenes and introduced new characters.

I like the way you had them talk also, that was well-done.

And of course this was one super-funny Flash that was fun to watch.

Awesome job, man!

[NG Office Theft]

Funny

The "What a nice guy" line is funny, but you need to do a better job with the Flash.

Also, your "AGAIN" button doesn't work.

jenova-absolute responds:

phixed, thanks anyway.

[My US of Whateva!]

HAHA!!

I like Bush, but this is hilarious.

I was having some serious audio issues though with it. There were a lot of dead spots with no soun when he was moving his mouth. Lile after the secret service guy came over when he was dancing. I'm not sure what was happening there at all.

But the graphics were great, audio was great and it was funny as hell. It gets a 5/5!