RSQViper's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Jerk 'N Bedn 01]

Bleh

It looked like it was going to be good.

Then it wasn't.

Too short, no good dialogue and the introduction was better and longer than the movie itself.

Evil-Kat responds:

agreed xD

[Star Wars: Old Wounds]

NICE!

That was a great movie right there. I guess it was Darth Maul, but it was still an awesome thing to have happen!

Your graphics were top-notch. Really clean. 10.

The style was perfectly-matching the graphics with some great action. 10.

The sounds were great as was the music. Only gripe was whoever did Owen Lars was a very bad actor. Kinda' hurt the feel of the movie. Maul's was good though, really good. 9.

The violence was well-done. The effects were great. 8

Not much interactivity, really. No big deal. 2

No humor, that's fine as there's no need. 0

Overall, certainly one of the top 10 ever on NG. 10!!

[Amputation]

Savior

I am your savior! WOO HOO!

Hehe. Nice movie, good animation. A little quick, though but I like it.

What was that blue line sitting there, though? It looked out of place. I thought maybe it was a stick that was already dead or something...

[motion typo - off spring]

Cool

That was neat, but it should have been the whole song. You should just switch up what you were doing with the helocopter and hve something else take over so it doesn't get broing to watch.

It was a neat idea, though. Making it must have been a logistical nightmare.

Good Luck, hope it gets through! 3/5

[10 ways Mario can die]

This Was Good

The Graphics were ok. A bit stretched for sprites, but still ok. The Gumbas talking was bad. Too smal and fast, I couldnt' read it.

The blood was, for the most part, only ok. It was just read. Instead of just using read, change the red colors and a little orangish, maybe a red-purple mixed in with the red. Have a few streaks and it looks MUCH better.

It was funny, though. I liked it and it made me laugh. Good Job.

DrClay responds:

well it wasnt until the middle part until i realized an easyer way.

yeah i know the blood sucked.
Well next time I might just use
the blood for MK.

well i am glad you liked it
thanks for the review
good luck with your stuff

[Technology Today Episode1]

HAAHAA!!

I liked this quite a bit. The style is very similar to the style I am working on now, so it must be a 10!!! LOL. Here's the breakdown:

Graphics: 8. It wasn't highly-detailed, but suited the video vrey well. Also, the lines were extremely clean and I didn't notice any little lines sticking out, which means you probably edit the heck out of you Flash.

Style: 10!! I like this style of animation. Using tweens is a smooth animation which, of course, can limit the artist at times so finding ways around it when needed makes these types of Flash very rewarding.

Sound: 7 It was good for the most part, but the green, floating guy's voice was very low and hard to understand. The other voices were good, the backgound music sounded good too. Also, sound was obviously condensed so that is always a plus.

Violence: 1 The guy held a gun. That's about as violent as it got, but that's fine as it isn't really needed.

Interactivity: 2 All I had to do was push a button. Again, this doesn't really matter in a Flash, so it's really moot. Although, it would be nice if at the beginning there were shortcut buttons to parts of the movie. Like "Skip Title", "Credits", etc.

Humor: 8 It was a pretty funny movie. Not a laugh riot, but it was still quite funny. An 8 is REALLY good, so be happy.

OVERALL: ZERO! I HATED IT!!! Ok, no... I give you an 8!!! Great video and I'm sure I'll be seeing more from you in the future. I see you've got a good score already (ALL HIGHLIGHTED IN BLUE FOR YOU!) so that is something to be proud of.

Best of luck to you, I'll be keeping my eyes open for your Flash in the future. Although, I guess I'll need them open or I'll crash my car, fall down stairs and all kinds of bad stuff, so... yeah.

5/5!!

DrClay responds:

do not worry........ the next one will have the violence.

and some of the small flaws in this will be fixed.

(happy for highlighted blue)

thanks for the review
good luck with your stuff.

[Tupac, "Bad Day"]

Ok

It needs work, for sure. You had a red line that stuck around for no reason and a red dot that appeared as well. The true animated scenes were done well, though so I'd stick with that. No more cutouts and moving their mouths.

I mean, it woul dbe an ok Flash if it were finished, but it didn't seem to be.

There's honestly no saving this. I gave it an 0/5.

[Gluttony]

Neat

You need to add a little bit of a sound track with some sound effects and this would be really good! It's good for a first flash, for sure, but the silence hurts it.

Good Luck!