Funny
That was entertaining.
I would suggest, that although Joe Cartoon is good and it's popular, that you try to just keep your Flash itself like his style. You've gone as far as actually copying his "Joetoon" font style as well.
Try to keep some space so less people try to tell you that you are just ripping off his style.
Nice Flash though. Good humor and I don't see how people said it was so harsh. It wasn't that bad at all.