RSQViper's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Ingus: Episode 7]

Nice Flash

That was pretty funny. Some of the animation was really good. Like the warping. Very well done.

Some of the voices were poor, though./ Or at least poorly recorded. A lto of popping and screaching through the speakers.

Good all-around Flash, though. 4/5.

[Adolf Hitler: ATWI80D 46]

Better

This is certainly better than that other Hilter drivel.

I thank you for screwing up the series that plagues NG.

Ms-Sly responds:

There was little innovation over the last forty, yes forty, variants. Even the latest Special Edition 4: Green Score made light of the growing popularity of its blandness.

Thanks for watching RSQViper.

[Alucard's Creek Ep03]

Funny

This was actually pretty funny. I like the take on Dawson's Creek and the use of the song throughout.

4/5

[Mech Cops PSA II]

DAMN RIGHT!!

Hang up the phone and drive, people!!!

I swear I can't stand driving and then getting cutoff by someone, then seeing they are one the damn phone!

I hate it!!!

I love this Flash though. =)

[fguck you]

What?

This can't be right. That's it?

Where's the rest? This is no good, man, it's unfinished.

The graphics are really good, but just having a clock face shouldn't be good enough to get this through. If it is, then shame on NG.

I'd like to see a finished Flash from you as it looks promising.

0/5

HurleyLock responds:

http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/314951

There ya go.

[edgardo is back]

Bleh

I really don't like these Cartoons you've been cranking out.

They aren't funny at all, and since that's what they're supposed to be, I can't support them. I gave you a 0/5 for this.

Instead of cranking out bad joke after bad joke, it would be nice to see you do something longer with more thought behind it.

And don't tell people not to watch this if they haven't seen the others. Other than the character, they have 0% to do with one another. If they don't like this one, they won't like the other ones.

[Mario In Windows III]

Fair

Your story was ok, your animation was fair, you humor was good, but your grammar and spelling were HORRIBLE. I mean there were mistakes in grammar all over the place and you spelled things wrong all the time and got words mixed up, too. You replaced "must" with "most", for one.

What you need is for someone to look over your work before you submit so they can fix all this for you. There's no excuse for this many errors, it was really bad. Distracting, really.

Edit your stuff BEFORE submitting. It would have been good otherwise.

1/5

[Bowsers Final Strike]

FIRST?

That is certainly up there with other great first flashes. One of the best Sprites I've seen that someone said it was their first. It was a great sprite even fi it wasn't a first.

I've never done a sprite, so I can't relate totally with you, but when I did my first Flash (a drawn animation) I was seriously anal about everything. I can tell you were as well because everything seemed so smooth and edited.

You have a bright future in store for you in Flash and I'll be keeping an eye out for you.

Great job! 5/5

[UnaPalabra]

Just OK

The song was pretty boring and drolling. It was ok in the fact that it fit the Flash itself, though.

The graphics were very plain. The drawing you used at the end was good, though, but the animation on it was done badly. What I mean by that is, when you moved something, you left its ghost behind it, so where it was became a blank spot on the drawing. That is poor animation.

There were some cool effects you used with the lines. I actually thought it would have been better if you just used the lines and the drawing at the end.

Some effects you used were very odd. Like the jumping around of that paragraph. That was really bad and annoying. It got in the way more than helped your movie.

This was just a PAR movie, but effort went into it and I hope to see you improve. I'm pretty sure it will pass judgement as well as it is somewhat original and shows a promising artist behind it.

2/5, work hard and improve. Learn from this Flash.

newtalonhardin responds:

:-D Thank you very much for the detailed review...With that in mind, I am sure i will do better.