RSQViper's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Devil Mail Cry]

Cool

That was not too bad. You spelled "faggot" wrong, though.

Anyway, it was short, to the point and had a laugh.

Not bad for a short.

[Badly Drawn Dawg Series 3]

Insane

From beginning to end it was entertaining, even the slower parts were entertaining.

Also, from the 1st Episode to the 3rd they were SO different. Thinking you were going to build from one to the next was insane because you definitely didn't from 2 to 3. Not that I mind.

Ep 3 was so strange, but it was funny to see him use a portal gun.

Nice job on animating sucky drawings well!

Splapp-me-do responds:

:D

Thanks!

[Anusboy]

WTF Did I Just Watch?

Well, I don't know what that was, but I was entertained.

The graphics were really good for sure, you had a good theme and stuck with it as well.

I'd say something about the storyline, but... I'm scared.

W-P-S responds:

You better be scareddd

[Egocaptured]

Better than MGA2

Well, this had some great comedy as simple as it was.

As far as I'm concerned it's funnier, much funnier, than Metal Gear Awesome 2. It was a nice change after watching that.

Nice job!

ImpendingRiot responds:

Thanks, but Egoraptor is still the awesomest awesome

[Metal Gear Awesome 2]

Erg...

The animation was pretty good, but I didn't laugh one time thru the whole thing. The very end when he had to figure out the 2nd controller part was the only sightly entertaining part of this movie.

Additionally, you used the "F" word a little too much and completely needlessly.

The word "fuck" doesn't make things funny.

[Nate's Experimental Video]

Well, that was FANTASTIC

I am more than impressed with this, man. You did a great job making it funny and switching it up thruout the Flash so we never knew what to expect.

I really liked the presentation of the credits, too. That was a good idea. Aubrey's video was cool, too the way you did it.

Great job!

ActiveObjectX responds:

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Glad you enjoyed it!

[Alien Abduction on V.F.]

Add Sound

This is awful and with no sound it's much worse.

Both of your submissions today have no sound. When you import them into Flash why would you NOT add sound FX?

You should do that.

007whoa1 responds:

I made everything except the backgrounds with flash. The backgrounds I used with adobe.

[Megaman Bros X3 episode 2]

Really Good

Well, not much more to add than I already wrote in Ep 1, but that the action was great in this.

It's obvious you take a lot of time working on things and you keep the movie interesting and use LOTS of sprites and sprite effects.

Nicely done. Very nicely done.

CommanderX responds:

Thanks

[Megaman Bros X3 episode 1]

Great Changes

Now, I may be wrong and forgetting, but I have seen this before and you did a lot to upgrade the movie. You have a new intro, menu and your next buttons are different.

The movie is quite good and you are definitely good with sprites. I can only imagine you improving from here.

I guess things to change in your next released Flash is not so many stops. Like, you could stop each time we hit the levels and that was a bit annoying. I think you could take the graphic you created to highlight them and make it Flash instead of stopping. You also need to double-check spelling, line up fonts and use a specific format on how you do things in your Flash.

Example Card how you put it.:

Yoshi rider

Info: Fast in ofensive
Hard in defensive

Attack's: Trow egg (you misspelled "Throw")
Attack 2: eat enemy
Attack 3: lick punch

How is should be:

Name: Yoshi Rider (Capitalize each word)

Info: Fast in Offensive
Hard in Defensive

Attack 1: Throw Egg
Attack 2: Eat Enemy
Attack 3: Lick Punch

Anyway, there you go. That's just one card, but most of your cards had misprints and all looked like they needed a format to follow.

Also, after all those things were introduced, at some point there was a frame that had typing that didn't pause.

Also, PLEASE don't delete this even if you redo it. Make the next one version 2 or something. It's good. Don't delete it. In fact, it's not worth making this again, just learn from it and keep going.

I also enjoyed your music selection. You had some cool music in here and some odd versions of popular songs... =)

CommanderX responds:

Thanks,
I fear I will not make another version of this movie because this movie is a verion 4, the only what I can do is to make modyficacions in next movie, it is nice that you like it,

I m not understant what you mean about stoping:

" I guess things to change in your next released Flash is not so many stops. Like, you could stop each time we hit the levels and that was a bit annoying. I think you could take the graphic you created to highlight them and make it Flash instead of stopping. "

Well, I do not get it what you mean, do this is somethink with character analisator or somethink else, anyway, thanks again.
Have a nice day.

[HP and the order of fries]

Yikes

Well, it had a lot of promise, but the voice acting was really bad. it kind of killed the whole thing.

Also it was without sound FX in a lot of places it seemed there should have been some.

You had a couple good jokes and some flat ones. Overall it was a good movie. The graphics were pretty good for sure.

Keep it up, just try getting some more SFX in your Flash so it doesn't seem like dead silence when action is taking place (yes I know there was BGM, but that doesn't replace SFX).

yarvenclog responds:

Well the audio was made last year during the summer, and at the time I have had very limited resources, but since then I have gotten more and better equipment for doing things like sound effects. And I have been told a thousand times that I need better voice acting, and Im working on it...