RSQViper's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Oval Man: Mini adventure]

Borderline

Not sure waht to say about this one. It's close to good, but there were lots of poor animation in it.

I think if you were to reevaluate this Flash and reanimate some things it would be much better.

Like right after the guy with the countdown on his body was kicked off screen. I am guessing a bomb went off? It was all white, but very poorly done.

Also, the floating blood fo ra lot of it. It was just floating there. Maybe it was 'supposed' to be in the trees, but it sure didn't look right if that's what it was.

Keep trying at it. The animation was ok, just too much "slow-mo".. Use that sparingly.

1/5

Mahabharata responds:

Thanks for advice.

And that blood was on camera not on tree -_-

[Mac Fred]

Solid

I think this is pretty decent for an animator in their early steps.

You showed you can animate a bit with frame by frame and your graphics, while plain, aren't bad.

Your explosion could use some work and you should work on tweens a bit. Like when the hat went to his head. That would have looked better with a good tween.

To me it was obvious you put some effort into it so I gave you a 4/5.

Go check out some tutorials on NG and other places on the web to improve further.

Nice job.

[Naruto Sings]

You've Got Promise

Well, you seem like you know how to animate a bit. Now you need to branch it out into larger projects with more going on.

This one was quite plain and the beginning was so long I was starting to think it was just a loop.

The graphics are quite good and your lip syncing was excellent.

Take what you've learned and expand. This animation on its own is borderline good, but shows a promising artist.

3/5

[Zombiehead Ep.8]

Really Good

I mean, you're not going to win any awards for graphics, but who really gives a **** when the story is this funny?!?

I like what you're doing here. You mix in some quick jokes with a funny storyline and very original characters.

Keep up the funny stuff!

5/5

[Elimination 3 Preview]

Cool

NG needs more car chases. I'd like to see the final version of this.

You spelled "Ultimate" wrong.

You also need some some effects. Try sounddogs for those.

The action was very smooth, but it was like you waited for the bad guys to get set up before you shot them. They'd come on the screen aim, sit there, then the hero would shoot them. For some reason they never really shot at him much. One did shoot him, but that was about it for the badguys. They were basically dummies to be shot.

Very promising, though. 3/5

Splurgle responds:

It's calld 'style' there weren't sound effects for a reason.

Plus, it's a preview, but thanks.

[A&A: "Katzenproblem"]

HAHA!

I like this a lot, man. The graphics are impecable and your style is extremely smooth. Awesome animation all-around, really. Very funny with the cat nd the ending. I wasn't expecting it to be so short, but you made me want a lot more! MAKE MORE!!!

=)

5/5!

AngryMouse14 responds:

-Salute- Can do. Working on the next scene already!

[Adios Star Syndicate!]

HAHA!

That was too funny.

Nice job at poking fun in all the right places.

5/5

[36-24-36 (Villian Battle)]

Looks Promising

Well, what you showed us, it looks promising, but there are some glaring issues that are EASY fixes, but dragged your score from me down.

1) Their faces. Please makes their lines darker. As-is I can't make their noses out at all, or mouths or any other line that may be there. I can see there is a nose, but it's so feint it can easily be missed. They look like blank, white faces.

2) Compress the sound. This should not be so large. It's WAAAY too big. COmpressing sound is a few clicks of a button and it's done. Please do it not only when you replace thi smovie with the fixed version, but also in your full-length feature.

I stress again this looks good. I want to see it finished, bu tyou've got to fix these things first.

2/5

JoP responds:

Thank you very much

I took your advice on the compression, but I don't think the lines are a problem, at least when the characters are larger (which they mostly are, just not in this particular animation)