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Looks Promising

Well, what you showed us, it looks promising, but there are some glaring issues that are EASY fixes, but dragged your score from me down.

1) Their faces. Please makes their lines darker. As-is I can't make their noses out at all, or mouths or any other line that may be there. I can see there is a nose, but it's so feint it can easily be missed. They look like blank, white faces.

2) Compress the sound. This should not be so large. It's WAAAY too big. COmpressing sound is a few clicks of a button and it's done. Please do it not only when you replace thi smovie with the fixed version, but also in your full-length feature.

I stress again this looks good. I want to see it finished, bu tyou've got to fix these things first.

2/5

JoP responds:

Thank you very much

I took your advice on the compression, but I don't think the lines are a problem, at least when the characters are larger (which they mostly are, just not in this particular animation)

HAHAHA!!!

Well, you have some learning to do using your srites, but THIS WAS FUNNY!

I honestly expected it to be bad when it started, but as it got going it was really great. I like the two alternate endings as well.

Very well-done!

4/5

Cool

Neat Idea and good graphics. I like the song as well. The story was neat and went with the song in a great way.

The lip sync was way off, though and no preloader (if there was one, it was broken). There were a lot of mouth positions you didn't use. Like B/p and V/F. It made the lip-sync that much more noticeable that it was off.

Good Flash though. I'd like to see those things fixed in a future version.

Well, damn...

I was starting to really like these.

But it's on to bigger and better things for you, I guess! Great series and I'm glad I could see it!

Good luck on your future projects.

*salute Ackbar*

5/5

VERY Funny

That was very well orchastrated. The snakes with the accents were very funny at the end. Good way to end the movie.

You had a lot going on ini this movie. Starting out I thought it would be a short, but it turned into a full-fledged movie that was very funny and with all the changes in scenery it keeps you glued to the screen.

Only problem I saw was the replay button. It's always necer if you make the area around the words clickable as well.

The graphics were perfect and they all matched each other. The style was great as you had a great pace for everything with good sound effects and the voices were clear. The music was good too and not repetative (at least noticeably).

Not much for interaction, no big deal. The humor was right on par, though. It was funny throughout with some good random humor as well as some things you were waiting for to happen, but were still funny.

5/5. I think this deserves front page and a portal award!

Hmmm...

The humor was ok in this. A bit dry, but ok.

The guy's eyes on the right were messed up. I think you made a mistake in the masking, but that should be a quick fix. Also, his mouth. I think it's the "E" sounding one. It is the color of the tooth on the inside. Maybe you forgot to fill it in white?

Ok, that's all I've got. You've got some things to fix.

3/5

Cool

I'm glad I ran accross this thread and didn't miss this. SOme very funny things. It's cool too see totally different humor since it is a collab. I hope to see another one of these some time.

Too bad I was late, though. I would have joined in on the fun.

And I'm hilarious!

5/5!

Snubby responds:

Thanks, I wish you could have been there to join the fun.

5/5 :o

Coo, but Edit more

The graphics were superb, bonestly. I'm not a fan of the original series, but this looks pretty cool.

One thing to keep in mind is giving us time to read. Often as soon as you got all the words on-screen you took them away.

I have no idea what the kid's name is because as SOON as you show it, it's gone.

I am guessing this happened because of the time consraint to the music?

Also, include credits in your movie giving props to the music artist since it is not your own music.

Very cool, just keep that stuff in mind. Good luck on the actual movie!

4/5

HAHA!

I really like th random humor and the fact you take jokes from prior episodes.

The eyes are really funny and in the last episode where Ackbar exploded at the end was HILARIOUS!

Luigo, the plummer, working on electicity is funny. That trap ain't ever gonna' work right...

=)

Keep it up! These are really funny!

Awesome Stick!

There was a dance routine. God Bless You!

Seriously a great movie. The fighting was very good and intuitive. All movement seemed very fluid.

Also, the face on the stick was REALLY well-done!

5/5!

CRAZY-King-JAY responds:

Thanks for the blessing from GOD, thats always a nice thing :)

Dude, where's my Flash?

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