RSQViper's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Chase Trailer]

Neat Idea

I think the idea is very cool and original. I look forward to the future releases this trailer previews. the whole robbing something and then the escape can have some great effects and end in escape, capture, or even death. I think it's awesome!

Things to keep in mind for the features: Keep slowdown to a minimum. I think when he jumped off the building it was well-used, but the jumping onto the bike took WAY too long. It should have slowed down right as he was about to land on the bike, then speed up when he kicked.

I love the ending, though. Very cool how he stopped in the sun, but I think if you closed into the sun and blocked out the rest it would have been more obvious it was animated to be like that. At first it looks like a mistake in animation.

The intro was a mistake, I feel. The sun over the horizon, though it looked good, lasted too long and if I didn't know any better I would have thought this was a joke submission or a total noob.

Sticks are fine if well-done. There were pretty good, but could use a little more effort, I feel. The use of masking on the faces would be beneficial when turning.

The movie had a pretty good feel to it despite the over used slowdown effect. I really hope the series continues and I feel the score this holds is right about what this deserves.

Best of luck to you!

CybermonkeyStudios responds:

thankyou very much, this is the animator speaking and i would liike to personally thank you for the kind and critical words, for the other reviews who were mad at me for a stick aniumation, "this one was the first one i have made for years", for those commenting on sound "i apologize the dialouge was just in the song already so i didn't know how to edit it out so i kept it" and to the people who were too stupid to catch on that there was more, "next time dont assume there's nothing if you watch the first 12.75 seconds of it (yah i timed it) and there's no movement, be a bit more patient

[KillaHammad ALi]

WOW

That was actually really neat.

It just kept on going and changing. Quite an intuitive pice.

I like the part where you did the FF part. That was pretty funny. I like how you used many different ways to make him move from place to place.

When he held the body and was using it as a shield there should have been bloodor something coming off the body as it was getting shot, though. Also, when he walked he looked funny and often at times his leg was hanging off.

But it was very entertaining and was a lot of fun to watch. Nice job!

wezrule responds:

hi sorry for the late response. Thx alot for your very positive review. I tried to make it as entertaining as possible, with no boring bits in it. Glad you enjoyed it and thx for your review

[The Koopa Hunter]

Very Nicely Done

I htink this is a great way to tribute Steve Irwin.

In a funny, yet respectful way.

The animation was quite smooth, and I like your story.

Good job!

[Solid Snake/Meryl Sex XXX]

Needs More To It

Not a big fan of this movie, really.

I mean, you don't even setup the warnings correctly. "Extreme Nudity, Extreme Violence, etc, etc". This is totally miscatagorised and on purpose.

The movie itself seems pointless and was also poorly animated. The badgersrinks and is all of a suddenin the box? Then the box moves past som eguards that were drawn ok, but not animated.

Then there's just a screenshot? The End.

Not very good in my opinion. It needs a plot, more story and a point. Then categorize it correctly.

[Black Eggy WITH A TWIST!!]

LOL!hat was a very funny

This hit me just right. That was a very funny idea and it was pulled off to perfection.

5/5!

[spacewalk's stick fight]

Cool

The sticks weren't the best, but they were entertaining to watch.

This could have used some background or at least something simple to represent the ground.

I was entertained, though. The sticks were doing interesting things and I like the way it ended for the most part.

I have you a 5 because I do like it and want it to pass.

I do suggest you hit up some animation tutorials in the tutorial collection.

[what it looks like]

Ruined

You had something going here, I thought, then you ruined it with that awful, looping noise at the end.

Instead of a quality piece with a good score, you have a poor piece.

0/5

meneerken-retteketet responds:

i don't mind. i like bad movies better than good ones so thanks for the compliment