Hmmm...
Well, the graphics were sub-par. Also, never say how bad or good something is in your writeup. Let the viewers decide.
You need to be careful with your layers and what's where. At one point your main guy walk past a dead body, but walks between him and the blood on the corpse's head.
Also, use slow-down to a MINIMUM. People over-use this and it's in poor form.
You also didn't have any sound effects for the uzis.
Keep trying, though. It looks like you're on the brink of making something worthwhile.