RSQViper's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Perfect Latin Lover]

Short, Funny, Good

That was pretty funny. Short and sweet, but I have to compare it to other Fernando Flashes and this one wasn't as good as them.

It did get a laugh out of me and had entertaining values, though. Definitely worth the watch and you kept it simple so it probably went together pretty quickly.

Nice job.

Sexual-Lobster responds:

cheers. you are right, in fact the challenge was to make an animation in one day...though it took one and a half in the end...

[Retarded Animal Babies 20]

Freaking Great

Well, I don't know what drugs you take to write these, man but it must be some damn good stuff.

Bunny turning into a time traveling Easter Bunny of Death and Destruction was clever. Some of the egg scenes were weird/lame, though.

But overall a pretty funny movie.

[Sonic ToD trailer]

OK.

That was ok, but man that song was freaking terrible. I mean HORRIBLE.

I hate J-pop.

Anyway, good luck.

[AngelRyuVS.EvilRyu]

Great Animation, Smooth Effects

You had some really great effects in this, man. Also some smooth animation.

The story was alright, but not too great. Although this was more based on action so that's fine.

I felt like when they were facing off it was too long of a pause. Maybe it was to build suspense, but I don't feel it did.

Overall, a really good Flash with some DAMN COOL effects!

azn-sk8er-dude responds:

Thanks..... I just did that pause to make the viewer have a good look of the characters, and put in some camera effects, and suspense

[Berzerk Void]

Unispired

Although the Flash had animation in it and a little fbf, I felt that overall it was uninspired and messy.

I think you would benefit by putting a little more time into this Flash and adding detail. There was too much white background in this.

Also, from one scene to the next it made no sense as they didn't seem to have anything to do with each other.

sirtom93 responds:

Thanks for reviewing. Id like to point out however that I put loads of time into this. But once you go past a frame it becomes very hard to go back and redo it, especialy with lots of layers. I will try again with something with a story but thanks anyway.

[God of Flowers]

Not bad

It was simple, somewhat funny with some good drawings, but it was slow.

I think if you added more it would be better, plus adding a little animation and even some music would be nice.

Nothing like skipping thru flowers and slaughtering undead to pass time and lighten one's mood, though.

[The Doctor Detective]

Odd. Very Odd.

Well, it didn't make tons of sense, but I feel like that was sort of the point. At least I HOPE that was the point...

Anyway, there were some funny parts. Like his email being murders and the fact his head reflected lights. Like the stop light was really pretty funny. Dumping aspirin on a dead guy was also a laugh.

You also had very clean if not somewhat simple graphics. It suited the Flash well.

Nice job.

[mouxla tv news 01]

English...

This is a massively ENGLISH website.

My advise to you would be to either do this in English or have English subtitles.

[willsmithKEAI493+day #2]

Horrid

Well, this was awful.

It would be nice if you actually put effort and made a Flash instead of cramming this tripe into the portal.

Animate something. Make it fun or funny. Make it DECENT. You can have a positive effect on Newgrounds, but your crew seems to not want to go that route with Flash like this.

Change it all. Change it all for the better.

toad77777 responds:

i talked 2 will smith about that, he said no

[The united sticks]

Leave the Bodies

It wasn't bad. Certainly passable.

My suggestion is to leave the dead bodies and not remove them.

You also had some issue where the sticks would change color?

Anyway, it was alright. Too short and pointless, though.