RSQViper's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Blockhead: Quick Shot 2]

Great

Quick and funny, I really liked it.

[Bytesize]

Awesome

I can't help but love this. Artists all bunched together with shorts like this is awesome and I'm glad I'm apart of it.

I think you should add this to a collection. Probably the Newgrounds Collection.

[boinky33]

Awesome

Voters on this site are tools. This is a hilarious skit and it deserves a much higher score.

I'm ashamed of NG for this sub-3 score, but not of you!

This was great! Good luck in the contest! (I could not finish mine)

[Businessman Blues]

Great Short!

Nice job on this, man. It's funny and unexpected.

Great job with the lip sync, too with smooth and fluid movements.

boinky33 responds:

t4hbfl.

[halo fraud]

Funny

Simple, funny, well-drawn and scripted with an unexpected ending.

You had a few jokes spread thruout and did a good job with such a short Flash.

Good job.

Khris responds:

the jokes were lame but this time i tried to consentrate on the drawings

[Whale vs Spoon]

Average-ish

Well, the drawing wasn't that great as it seemed pretty messy. Not a lot of work put into this for such a short, simple toon.

I think putting a little more graphically behind it and actually lip syncing would make for a better movie. I mean it's already short, why shorten it further by making it cheaply?

Also, work on your music editing. It just cut off for seemingly no reason. You can make it trail out if you want it to stop and it's easy to do and makes it SO much better.

The script/idea was alright. Pretty odd matchup, but that's fine. You did what I feel you could with the idea and the length you were going for.

Best of luck.

Ddiddily responds:

Hey, thanks for coming back to my movies.
I really appreciate that you have reviewed two of my flashes.
Yeah, the first time it cuts out, I dont know why it did that but I dont know how to trail it. I'll look into it though and learn how.
Lip syncing, yeah, I should have put more into that.
Thanks for the advice.
Best of Luck to you too, I'm a fan of your flashes.

[Remember Ton Part 1]

Well...

I mean this would be really good if it was your first Flash, but it isn't.

I mean, your plot and acting is ok and everything, but this is one ugly-drawn Flash. You should try using lines, circles and squares to draw if you're drawing with a mouse. That'll help you clean up your animation, too.

Good luck. It looks interesting.

[Road trippin']

Pretty Good

Well, it was entertaining and you had some decent, but pretty simple animation in here.

I wasn't a huge fan of the song and the actual video, especially near the end seemed to get slow and drag out. Maybe if you did a few more things during the guitar solo and at th every end added a few scenes or something. It just ended up watching you practice lip syncing near the end and that got a bit boring.

Your lip sync was good, though. That's important. You did a great hob with it. You also had some cool scenes.

Overall good job. I went 4/5 on this one.

Rutger responds:

Thanks! I was really struggling at the solo and at the end indeed-It's hard to find something you can do there...

[David's Adventures Eps 6]

Odd and Funny

Well, I can't recall ever seeing the other episodes, but I enjoyed this one. The action was entertaining and you kept it funny with David's antics.

The voice was weird, but fitting in a humor setting and the fact that he is fighting and killing Sesame Street characters is freaking funny.

I also stuck around thru the credits and that Cookie Monster piece was funny. I had a feeling something would await me at the end of the credits.

[Primal War 17]

Awesome as Always

Well, this was freaking terrific YET again!

The use of probably the best audio artist on NG didn't hurt you either. Earthbones by bosa was a great choice. I only wish you cranked it up a bit more. >=)

Your graphical representation of animals with human qualities is unmatched. The action was excellent and the animation was very good as well.

I don't get tired of these.