RSQViper's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Just Rad]

Nice Music

There wasn't a ton to watch since it repeated a lot, but it went really well with the music. The graphics were pretty good and the animation was pretty good as well.

Unfortunately as soon as I was getting into it, it was over. =(

ShortMonkey responds:

lol... shoulda made it longer, eh? :)

[Piggy Back Stack]

A piggy back, huh?

Well, your animation is alright, though there was not much to animate.

What gets me is the joke. It was pretty bad. Like, if this came to my mind I definitely wouldn't put it into a Flash, yikes.

I'd say instead of pushing to think of something to make a Flash about, write something down that comes to you out of the blue, then make THAT into a Flash. It'll be better.

Good luck.

POWZA responds:

ok i will

[A Sport Short]

Good Practice

It wasn't all that great to watch, but this is good practice for an animator. Maybe use this to make something more entertaining?

JayCee93 responds:

no its not supposed to be a good practice, but i suppose it is

[Fur is Bad For You]

A Quick Laugh

Not bad. It wasn't in sync too great, though as the sounds generally happened before the action took place. Possibly because you didn't use stream?

Anyway, the drawing were alright. A bit messy, though.

This was an important PSA, though. I don't get the "furry" craze.

pauljs75 responds:

Yeah, I had trouble getting the thing to synch, and all sounds are set to stream to the timeline. It would do just fine in the program, but once exported it gets out of whack. Changed it to get rid of separate scenes (the synch was much much worse when separate scenes were used) but there still seems to be a few issues going on. My experience is limited in some ways, otherwise I'd probably know a fix/workaround for that stupid bug. Might also have something to do with the soundtrack being made up from more than one sound clip? ("Advisory", Intro bit, and main flick all had different .wav files)

As for the PSA being important? Not really, it's actually a bit of the joke. In case you didn't notice, the character saying "fur is bad" was furry. His argument kinda fell apart... (literally?) Then the rest is just ridiculous to work with the cartoonish nature of the soundtrack. I don't think the guy character really knew what he was in for.

[Nightwalking]

Cool ANimation

I have ultimate respect for people that can draw. I suck at drawing now. I was great when I was a kid.

Thanks to Flash I can have straight lines now... lol.

ANYWAY!!! I like the animation. It wasn't really slow like you said, but it would have benefited from some music overlayed onto it.

Something like this must take quite some time as you have to redraw everything and it looked great.

Nice job!

Slackman responds:

Thanks. Years of not paying attention in class have led to me being able to doodle pretty well. My next short will have music. Thanks for the advise!

[RWD: 004]

LMAO

You see... I could tell Susy was a Nazi, Satanic, harbinger of death the moment I laid eyes on her.

Poor Paws. But he got what he deserved for trusting that slut!

Also, GREAT use of music. It cracked me up when it came on.

Nogfish responds:

LOL you crack me up kind sir.

Thanks for the kind words and wonderful plot synopsis.