It started good...
It really started good. I mean, it was fun to watch. You had some really cool effects going onand a cool song so I know you have talent.
Anyway, after all the cool stuff, you ran out of ideas right around when you started saying "Circles! Square. See it!" Then you had Bill Gates' floating torso and the whole Flash lots it.
Cool stuff, man. Try to stick with it next time for an awesome flash, because the beginning WAS awesome.