Flat
I like your episodes and you're one of my few fav authors, but this episode was a massive letdown. The jokes just weren't funny, the timing was extremely slow and there were long lulls with nothing really happening. Maybe a little BG music at times would have made it a little better, but you really need to speed up some of the speach and have quicker back-and-forth between the characters.
I was honestly pretty bored watching it. =(
Anyway, good luck on Season 2. I'm hoping it is more like 1-5 than this one.