RSQViper's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[SleepEasy]

Very Fun Watch

This was a lot of fun to watch, man.

I like the dream sequencing at the beginning and how places changed to other places like dreams often do. Also, the stars were an awesome effect!

Great writing and animating!

RupeeClock responds:

The stars were a surprisingly easy effect as well, it's just a movieclip inside a movie clip inside a movie clip, one movieclip stretching or rotating another. :)

[Searching for Hope intro]

Not TOO bad...

You definitely need to do a little homework before you start making these.

Like, your bullet you used was the bullet AND the casing. The casing generally ejects at the gun and is never fired. Only the bullet is fired.

The story looks like it could be decent, so good luck with that.

You also need to use stopallsounds and the end of your movie so it doesn't continue into the beginning.

FlamingMoose responds:

welll I fixed the sound problem before I submitted it but apparently the updated version wasn t the oen submitted so it makes me look totally inexperienced lol. And sorry I REALLY don t know much about guns and bullets but I will try to find out more if I dare do more close up shots. And have a casing fall from the gun. Thanks for the feedback and constructive critisizzim.

[Jay Short # 2!]

EH?

It was funny sand all over the place to some odd music.

I liked it.

TheCriminalDuder responds:

Thank ye.

[Jedi vs. Ninja]

What I thought would suck ROCKED!

Dude, when I read this I thought "Pheh! This is going to be stupid."

But, dude you rocked this whole thing. The animation was quite good, but when you turned it up a notch and things really started getting heated, I was really into this movie.

Yup. I gave you a 5. I don't give those out too often. But you deserved the hell out of it!

ActiveObjectX responds:

nice! thanks man!

[World of Warcraft short]

Wow. Nice First.

This was great for a first.

Only issue was the music stopping before it ever finished.

Graphics were quite good and the animation was better than just about everyone's first animation. So, well done. Especially for a rushed project.

I hope to see bigger, better things from you in the future.

4/5

Buttered-Noodle responds:

Yes, well, first off thank you so much for your comments! I am glad that you enjoyed the animation!

The animation is supposed to run at 20fps, but, for some reason, it appears to be running at a stinted speed since I submitted. I am trying to fix this issue and I hope to do so before the night's end!

The music is supposed to play with the animation from start to finish, sadly, it doesn't want to cooperate :)

Once again thank you so much for the comments!

[The Line]

Was OK

Not bad, but if you're going to use an audio portal artist like Bosa (who's awesome) at least put in his song number to credit him in the movie selection. You just go to edit your movie and for portal artist, put the NG number. This one is 82655, so put that in there.

I did the research for you, please do it.

The movie was pretty slow, but not bad. It was a clean animation, but not much was going on which made is somewhat drag.

Confettiman responds:

Thx. I rly like Bosa's stuff too, and I even put a link to it in the credits. :D
I was just a bit confused about the creditting system provided in movie submition. I'll get fix that right away...

[Stickmen On Crack]

...

What the... you stole this from YouTube, you jerk!!!

HAHA! Just kidding!

I thought this was damn cool. You basicallt only used stick figures, a bear, a doctor pepper and an appliance here and there to make this and it was done well.

I don't see how they were on crack, though...

But the movie itself was fun to watch and you won a 5 from me.

export-gold responds:

Tank you so much, you ROCK!

[Rise of Alfred]

Off the Wall Funny

Wow. This was really something. When I clicked play, at no time was I expecting this awesome Flash. This thing deserves a daily award and front page RIGHT NOW!

I do offer a word of advice: Please add a preloader. This thing is huge and many people won't watch it without one just because of its size. Just grab the NG one and put it on the 1st frame.

Anyway, back to your awesome Flash. You obviously put a TON of time into this. You used lots of frame by frame, many angles, characters, scenes, it was crazy.

You humor was so insane and your animation mixes with it perfectly. What an absolutely great feel this movie had. I'm sure you're proud of it.

AWESOME! 5/5 & 10/10 and rightfully deserving! This goes on my fav list!

emily-youcis responds:

THANK YOUU i would love a daily award and front page,but .. . . . . .
AND yes, i am supremely proud of my mindchild!