RSQViper's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Neo v Smith]

Wow

For as limiting as sprites can be you did a great job in this.

You shined especially bright when there were lots of Smiths on the screen and also when you circled around Neo when he did the BIG uppercut.

This was great!

LeviFolds responds:

BiG uppercut is definitely the best part for me.

[Bus Drift]

Not Bad

That was ok for a school project.

I think the arm at the end could have used thinner lines for hair because it looked pretty bad.

The song was alright and you could have done a little more with it like when you made the sign blink to it.

Anyway, keep it up!

Proottalfain responds:

Actually the song was added at the end, so any coincidence is a coincidence.

[[Misc] Teacher]

Quick, Simple Funny

I didn't see the one you were inspired by, but this was good.

The guy kept taking it to another extreme which was funny.

Oddly enough, even with no legs and hardly any animation, this was funny and quality.

AxeShades responds:

yeah i know. it's like that one guy .. umm michael something. i forgot but he makes flashes that have like no animation yet people think they are the funniest shit ever.

[Madness 3D trailer (OLD)]

Idea: Good Outcome: Messy

I mean, it's an interesting idea, but the use of fading for shading was a bit weak, plus you spin around the guy and the building and the building in the BG remains?

It was also slow and bland and when you actually kill someone it looked worse than if it was one in 2D.

The idea has promise, but it needs serious polish.

adollfo responds:

The movie will be better.

[AngelRyuVS.EvilRyu]

Great Animation, Smooth Effects

You had some really great effects in this, man. Also some smooth animation.

The story was alright, but not too great. Although this was more based on action so that's fine.

I felt like when they were facing off it was too long of a pause. Maybe it was to build suspense, but I don't feel it did.

Overall, a really good Flash with some DAMN COOL effects!

azn-sk8er-dude responds:

Thanks..... I just did that pause to make the viewer have a good look of the characters, and put in some camera effects, and suspense

[Berzerk Void]

Unispired

Although the Flash had animation in it and a little fbf, I felt that overall it was uninspired and messy.

I think you would benefit by putting a little more time into this Flash and adding detail. There was too much white background in this.

Also, from one scene to the next it made no sense as they didn't seem to have anything to do with each other.

sirtom93 responds:

Thanks for reviewing. Id like to point out however that I put loads of time into this. But once you go past a frame it becomes very hard to go back and redo it, especialy with lots of layers. I will try again with something with a story but thanks anyway.

[willsmithKEAI493+day #2]

Horrid

Well, this was awful.

It would be nice if you actually put effort and made a Flash instead of cramming this tripe into the portal.

Animate something. Make it fun or funny. Make it DECENT. You can have a positive effect on Newgrounds, but your crew seems to not want to go that route with Flash like this.

Change it all. Change it all for the better.

toad77777 responds:

i talked 2 will smith about that, he said no