RSQViper's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Paper Mario Parody One]

Not Bad

Well, the animation and Mario were good, but it wasn't funny at all.

Austin123 responds:

What not funny :( , haha yeah I admit this wasnt funny but the pipe problem one ad to be my best one

[Smack my car]

Not Bad

Nice job doing the speeding up on the Lamborghini. It was smooth fo rsure.

It was kinda weird that the guy on the bike landed on his feet, though and when he shot the grenade it was odd looking. More like a shell.

But I appreciate the Flash. Nicely done and short. Seems like a practice Flash, but it came out very well.

[Joey Stick 3]

It wasn't too bad, really.

It could DEFINITELY use some sound FX, though.

I also feel like you used blur a bit too much in the very beginning. Basically the bike was the focal point and should not have been blurred. I know blur is fun, but take it easy.

The fight was short, but not too bad, but then the guy on the pipe just... disappeared. Seems like a mistake to me.

Anyway, decent job, keep trying.

Toady1104 responds:

I don't put sound cuz it's very short and ok, I'll try to use less blur next time xD

[YoinK's Newgrounds]

HAHAHA

This was really funny, man.

Really good job using the characters and stuff. I also like when you used your hands to talk.

YoinK responds:

thanks dude, glad you liked it.

[PhoenixGames Interview]

Kinda' Funny

It wasn't too bad. It had it's moments and there were some moments I laughed.

One thing was annoying is they guy talked like Borat. Seemingly for no reason.

[The Siege of Lubungan]

This Was Cool

Even thgh it was an informative Flash (usually boring) you made it interesting.

The graphics were pretty good in some places, but then in other places they were quite plain. My advice to you would be to stick to a single style in each Flash as some things didn't fit with others.

Like the people were very plain, but some of the BGs were pretty good. Other BGs were really bad, though.

In any case I liked it.

[total karnage 3]

Poor

This one is also not very good.

It's like watching it is a chore. If your Flashes are so bad that watching them is painful, then maybe you should keep practicing them before submitting them?

In any case, continue improving as you've got a LONG way to go.

[total karnage 2]

Pretty Bad

The animation is so stiff. If you're going to animate a stick it should be fluid in order to make it interesting to watch.

The way you animated this you could actually draw and tween people the same way you make these... sticks.

This just didn't do it for me. You still have a lot to learn.

[Newgrounds Newgrounds]

Not Worth it

Well, for one it was slow (which is weird because it was also short).

In any case, if you're going to animate something so short and simple you should at LEAST animate very detailed and have better graphics. The NG tag isn't even something you made so you get no props for that.

[My Dog 2]

erm...

I'm not a huge fan of this kind of thing. You didn't even use fill on a lot of this stuff and it was messy as a drawing.

It WOULD be cool if you drew it like this (not as messy) then animated the dog. That would actually be really cool.