RSQViper's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Landing in a Flash Can]

Not Good

That was pretty bad. Not really something to enjoy. So many random things that don't really make any sense at all with the song you picked. Oh, and the song... awful.

I had to 0/5 you. As for this not being your first animation... do you really want to brag about that?

Veltri responds:

"So many random things that don't really make any sense at all with the song you picked. Oh, and the song... awful."

That was kind of the point, but if it's not to your taste then that's fine by me. The song IS awful, that's what makes it funny to listen to, at least for me anyway. And regarding this not being my first animation; the badly cut-up style of the whole thing is a trademark of the Animutation genre. I was going for a similar look to Andrew Kepple's 'French Erotic Film', so it wouldn't have looked right if I had hand-drawn everything.
Thanks for watching anyways; this was a one-off and my other entries will be quite far-removed from it.

[Samus vs Mario part 2]

TOO SMALL!

This is way too small. I'm squinting trying to read this stuff.

[Mario Meeting samus]

I pressed X

I had to stop it when Samus started talking.

You need to get the words on-screen MUCH faster. I didn't want to waste my time waiting to read. It' sbad enough having to read a movie, but having to wait to read? I think you should slide them on MUCH faster or make them appear. One of the two.

[A Pirate's Life]

Great!

I thought this was a really cool animation and I'm glad I found it.

Even though they were sticks they were well-animated. I'm not sure what some people mean by bad animation as it was quite good.

Thanks for the laughs!

[Lukai and his castle]

Not too Shabby

You have some bad editing in here actually. Near the end you can see right through to the green background. Fix that up for a cleaner look.

Also, some of your sound effects sounded a bit off. Like a water sound. I'm still not sure what that was.

The short was pretty good though. Nice graphics, good animation and funny.

Keep up the good work. Just edit a little better next time.

[Canvas Lock Intro]

Hmmm...

It was well-drawn and the animation was not too bad at all.

But, this was all pretty pointless. Just seemed like a reason to swear and that made it really boring.

incative-account responds:

:'(

[*****LOL CANCER*****]

GOOD!

Hey, man. I was your savior so I thought I'd say somthing...

THAT WAS HILLARIOUS!!!

EPIC!

[incubus]

Okay

That wasn't bad, actually. Not great and it could use work, but it wasn't crap.

I gave it a 2/5 but if you improve things like some of the animation it can get much better.

I liked the credits though. Do a little better graphics with that and they would be really cool.

As for the story it was kind of confusing. Like the kid had his head off, then he didn't. I know it was flashing thoughts or something, but it was weird. maybe make it more obvious, I dunno.

Anyway, keep on improving. This wasn't bad.

[Turkey Day]

Cool

Pretty good T-Day movie you got here.

Only thing I was really disappointed in was the quality of the turkey graphics. The main turkey was fine, but it seemed like you rushed drawing everything after the first scene including the other turkeys. I thought that hurt the movie a bit, unfortunately.

More animation and consistant drawing would get you some relaly high scores.

Good job though. It's still a good Flash. Keep it up and I'm sure you'll do nothing but improve.

[Paint Ball]

Not too bad

The graphics were outstanding in this. Good job on that.

It was a bit short, but it was a good flash.