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[DS Dragon Quiz]

Annoying

The quiz is good, but why do people insist on making people start over when they get a question wrong? We already got all those right. Why make us start over?

Please adjust it so that you just go back to the question you missed.

Good quiz otherwise, but I stopped out of annoyance because I got so farm then got the first question again.

2/5

IceDragon64 responds:

Sorry to dissapoint you- I understand how you feel. That is why it has a checkpoint after q 7. most computer games make you go back a bit- in the case of quizzes part of the skill is in remembering the right answers on unfamiliar subjects. Please click on the title word Dragon for a secret button to take you to q5! Please do finish it.
Best wishes and thanks for the feedback

[Hurry Bird]

Nice

I like it a lot, man. Awesome job on this.

Everything was drawn and put together very well. It ran smooth and was a lot of fun.

5/5!

Snubby responds:

Thanks a lot for the support, couldn't do it without ya!

<3

[WoW scenecreator 2.0]

Good

Not bad, but when you choose some things it'll delete objects you already have on the board. Even if they are not the same object. that was pretty annoying.

I do like what you've done here. This is quite nice. It could just use a little more editing so more objects are usable at the same time.

3/5

Minimized responds:

I know how to make more than one object aviable at a time, but due to space issues, that's not a good idea.

[The EasyWay of Explosions]

Not Too Good

Your example of the sprited explodion was terrible at the end. It was awful.

I can't believe this is how you teahc people.

Then I look at you Flashes and see one other. It's a tutorial.

Make Flash before you teach so you can actually learn yourself. Don't KIND OF figure out how to do something and them make a bad tutorial that will never even reach a 2.5 score.

Seriously, learn Flash.

Thiagozb responds:

Hell,i know how to use Explogen2, i'm not the maker of it, but 1 thing you must understand(sorry 2 things): 1- I'm trying to help people with explosions 2- If there is wrong spelled words, there's just 1explanation...i'm from brazil

[Safeguard]

Best game I've Played on NG

This is the coolest game I've played on NG. There were quite a few ways you could take damage and a lot to watch out for.

Coolest thing was when that egg beater-looking thing shoots the white ball. I saw the little ball still there and thought, "that's odd" then quite some time later... BOOOOM!!!

Hehe. Very awesome. 5/5!

The-Iron-Fist responds:

thanx much, best reveiw ive gotten

[Teach Meh!:Starters Guide]

Ok Tutorial

That was a decent tutorial, but there is one pretty major flaw: You next and back buttons.

See, they're hollow. Fill them in with black so they are much easier to click. As it is now you have to move your mouse around so find the "sweet spot" so you can move the frame.

It should be an easy fix, though. It's a quick symbol edit, then you can just swap the file out.

Nice tutorial though. People should find it helpful.

3/5

Courgy responds:

gug people bite my head off cause of these buttons ^_^

[Crazy Squash]

Cool

That was neat. I think you should make it go RIGHT to the next level instead of having to hit space. A lot of people don't read directions.

Also, please rename "HELP" to "Instructions". It makes it more obvious they are directions.

Your little walls are probably a little too thin. The ball often gets stuck IN them and bounces around really fast in them and then releases. Very odd.

Some sort of sound when the ball hits a wall, another for the paddle hitting the ball and another for a square getting cleared would be a great asset to your game.

Nice idea though. I gave it a 3/5. Good luck!

trig1 responds:

cheers!

[Kill Smile!]

Hmmm...

I don't have a webcam, so I didn't vote.

What I will tell you is this. I still killed the guy by doing nothing which I found odd. Next thing I knew it said I won as he slowly started to get messed up.

I will also say that using a big smiley face is a weird choice as the graphics are subpar by doing so.

Anyway, good luck.

AngryFaic responds:

Yeah, if you don't have a webcam it kills itself.

*Read author's comments, please*

[Flash- Tips and Tricks v2]

Weak Tutorial

Instead of just showing the toolbar, you should go over each tool.

Also, the font you use and the colors is tough on the eyes.

As a tutorial it was very unclean and pretty weak as a whole. I didn't like it.

It also doesn't help that you have no real Flash to your credentials as far as I can see.

1/5

Potatoefp responds:

It's supposed to give the reader tips on how to work better with flash. And using different colors help to remember stuff.

[Stealth Hostage]

OK

I think this is a case of "Good Idea, Poor Design".

I mean, the whole idea of it is ok, but it's really just a point and click game. The hand that we use to move is annoying. The pointer is right underneath it. What this means is that the hand is useless. It's in the way and if you don't notice that the pointer is there, then it can be very hard to even play. Also, the hand was poorly drawn.

Some of the dieas were ok. Like thrwing the rock (that was there for some odd reason) and turning off the light.

It was also EXTREMELY short. Too short.

Anyway, you should remove that hand and make a little hand as the curser.

demoninabottle responds:

okay, thanks for the advice and ideas