RSQViper's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Wolfenstein 3D Headshot]

Kinda Funny

Well, the audio wasn't too hilarious, but it had it's moments.

The one thing that really confused me is why you never, or at least rarely, lined up the kills. Most of the time they weren't even close to in-line with the shot and the shot really would have hit the wall.

Anyway, it was ok.

DuDuL responds:

Couse it was in old games like that
Doom
Wolfenstein 3D
Duke Nukem 3D

You never played those?

[Clayground - Dentist]

What Changed? Nothing.

Well, even though you didn't seem to change a thing, I liked it yesterday and I like it today.

I still say when you are singing that it's too quiet and the sound drowns out the words in places. Possibly because you mumbled a lot during the song.

Still, it was funny and everyone dies. It's always good when everyone in the movie dies.

Nice job. =)

BlakTornado responds:

I had a cold when I recorded :( lol.

But thanks :)

I did try to make the vocals in the song louder, though.

[To The Brim Of Existence]

Those A-Holes Don't Know What They're Missing!

I lied this a lot. It was funny, the music was funny and the graphics were pretty good. Animation was smooth, too.

5/5 10/10!

boinky33 responds:

SHUT THE HELL UP!

[Blow The Whistle!]

This is GREAT

Reminds me a lot of the Blow My Whistle original, but this exceeds it by far.

I also REALLY like the garbage whistle transformer. VERY cool!

Tom should shrink this and use it for when we blow the whistle. =)

Androu1 responds:

Wow.Thanks,good to see someone liked the garbage whistle transformer! Noone hasn't noticed the garbage whistle di--woops,I said too much :P

And,if Tom would use it,I would think my life is full!! (well,not really,but it would make me fucking happy! :)

[Bowl of Soup]

Sick and Funny

This was really gross and disturbing, but damned funny. You sure didn't seem to hold back... hehehe

Nice job!

(I was actually about to heat up some soup, but now... I think I won't)

JunkYardAnimations responds:

lmao, i hope i havent scarred you for life so that you'll never eat soup again

[Sonic X games ep 13]

Continue Buttons?

First off, you should REALLY put how to watch IN the movie. Like (hit space to play) on the first frame or something. Not everyone reads full write-ups and for a bit there, I thought you forgot continue buttons.

The action was fairly good. I liked a lot of the effects you used. At times I couldn't tell if you used sprites for some of them or not.

Also, going back and forth from sprites to drawings was an interesting idea. I would say to draw a bit better next time, or at least more in the style of the sprites themselves (trace them or outline from them or something) because your drawings didn't really fit in so well, but it WAS a cool idea.

Some credits tunes would have been nice, too. =]

Roaltyx responds:

I'll try to add that in the next movie :)

[Dungeons&Dragons- trailer]

Looks OK

The animation was VERY iffy. When you had the guy walking to the door he was skipping around a bit. Also, the dragon was tough to tell it was a dragon because of the white on white.

The fire was done well, though and you used great music to set it up.

ervitz responds:

there will be alot more frame by frame in the series. and the skipping is because i used a graphic symbol instead of a movieclip symbol for the walking animation inside the symbol.
thanks for your comment

[49 Days of the Week Ep.1]

hehe

Was that guy sleeping with a hat on? Or was that not a hat?

Anyway, the animation was pretty good and the graphics all seemed to fit alright. But your story was disjointed and it was a bit slow. The slowness may have been because of the song you used. It was pretty annoying as it was just repeating itself over and over.

Anyway, overall a decent toon.

MagicTree responds:

It was a Beanie, and he's sorta a bum so yeah he sleeps in it. yeah i couldn't think what other songs to use for that episode.

[Browser Battles]

Good

Well, the camera work was very good. The lip sync was good, too, but as for movement, there really was none. It was all lip sync. =(

The jokes were decent, but the way it ended seemed more like you ran out of ideas vice that's how you wanted it to end. The voice also changed at the end, but it was still clear.

Overall good. I liked and enjoyed it. Try to build from this movie.

ShortMonkey responds:

I may make a sequel with actual fighting... but then again... I may not. :)

[Dangerous pill.]

Didn't see THAT coming!

The walking animation was crude (no feet?) but the story in the animation was pretty funny. I definitely will be staying away from Viagra. And I might give my dog away, too.

I liked his shirt. Nice touch. His, umm.. junk was REALLY weird-looking. Yikes! His day got worse from there.

You also had some weird bugs in the movie in the BG. The lines on the bed moved? It was weird, I don't know what happened. If you didn't, when you make something so multi-colored, make a new Symbol, then build it, even if it uses many layers. It will fix those lines.

I hope to see you improve the animation and graphics/shading. The story is great, so I'm sure you've got more stuff, too that'll be funny.

DnaDraxxus responds:

Yea it was my first so it was rather primitive. Glad you liked the storyline i got the idea from a multitude of sources.

I'll have to look into those bugs, i noticed the border seems broken on one side, maybe I'll get around to fixing that.

Thanks for the review i have come a long way since this submission and hope to make more soon.