RSQViper's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[FLCLNX]

Ok

That was ok, but it honestly got a bit boring. I actually yawned at one point.

You put a lot of work into it though, so I gave you a 4/5.

Cloud-Orion responds:

it is a bit bland. Meant to only spend a little bit of time on it and move on, but...school is hard and time consuming.

[Shadow of the killer]

ISSUES

Your mic is terrible. I had to stop it. It HURTS my ears with that whistle. Record either on a quieter setting, get a new mic, or get someone to Voice Act for you.

You had no preloader either and you need one. It free and on NG, no excuses.

Another issue is the fact that the beginning was very slow and boring. For a while I thought it would be just the letters because it took too long. Find a better and faster way to do that.

Just fix it. It's promising.

IeatPUSSY responds:

that was a chick doing the voice lol. was not me. it was me at the end. the who are you. the rest is a a chick

[NG Office Theft]

Funny

The "What a nice guy" line is funny, but you need to do a better job with the Flash.

Also, your "AGAIN" button doesn't work.

jenova-absolute responds:

phixed, thanks anyway.

[Adolf Hitler: ATWI80D 27]

Not Enough Variety

There just isn't enough variety from one to another to justify making this a series. It's just a different photo in the back with Hitler either wearing or holding something different in each one.

Taking all 80 and putting them into one and showing his route between each (kind of like the Indiana Jones movies) would have been a descent Flash, but this just doesn't cut the cake for me.

And, again, you use Hitler for some reason and claim him to be some sort of great person, which he is not. He was an evil man and this isn't a funny or fun Flash just because he's in it. He degrades it further. Why not someone inspirational and a descent human being instead of someone who is viewed as hateful and obviously had million killed?

The music is ok, but the same over and over, so it really loses its appeal.

All-in-all just a poor example of a Flash.

AfroUnderscoreStud responds:

I suggest you watch the submission. It doesn't claim that Hitler is a great person.

[Jerk 'N Bedn 01]

Bleh

It looked like it was going to be good.

Then it wasn't.

Too short, no good dialogue and the introduction was better and longer than the movie itself.

Evil-Kat responds:

agreed xD

[10 ways Mario can die]

This Was Good

The Graphics were ok. A bit stretched for sprites, but still ok. The Gumbas talking was bad. Too smal and fast, I couldnt' read it.

The blood was, for the most part, only ok. It was just read. Instead of just using read, change the red colors and a little orangish, maybe a red-purple mixed in with the red. Have a few streaks and it looks MUCH better.

It was funny, though. I liked it and it made me laugh. Good Job.

DrClay responds:

well it wasnt until the middle part until i realized an easyer way.

yeah i know the blood sucked.
Well next time I might just use
the blood for MK.

well i am glad you liked it
thanks for the review
good luck with your stuff

[Technology Today Episode1]

HAAHAA!!

I liked this quite a bit. The style is very similar to the style I am working on now, so it must be a 10!!! LOL. Here's the breakdown:

Graphics: 8. It wasn't highly-detailed, but suited the video vrey well. Also, the lines were extremely clean and I didn't notice any little lines sticking out, which means you probably edit the heck out of you Flash.

Style: 10!! I like this style of animation. Using tweens is a smooth animation which, of course, can limit the artist at times so finding ways around it when needed makes these types of Flash very rewarding.

Sound: 7 It was good for the most part, but the green, floating guy's voice was very low and hard to understand. The other voices were good, the backgound music sounded good too. Also, sound was obviously condensed so that is always a plus.

Violence: 1 The guy held a gun. That's about as violent as it got, but that's fine as it isn't really needed.

Interactivity: 2 All I had to do was push a button. Again, this doesn't really matter in a Flash, so it's really moot. Although, it would be nice if at the beginning there were shortcut buttons to parts of the movie. Like "Skip Title", "Credits", etc.

Humor: 8 It was a pretty funny movie. Not a laugh riot, but it was still quite funny. An 8 is REALLY good, so be happy.

OVERALL: ZERO! I HATED IT!!! Ok, no... I give you an 8!!! Great video and I'm sure I'll be seeing more from you in the future. I see you've got a good score already (ALL HIGHLIGHTED IN BLUE FOR YOU!) so that is something to be proud of.

Best of luck to you, I'll be keeping my eyes open for your Flash in the future. Although, I guess I'll need them open or I'll crash my car, fall down stairs and all kinds of bad stuff, so... yeah.

5/5!!

DrClay responds:

do not worry........ the next one will have the violence.

and some of the small flaws in this will be fixed.

(happy for highlighted blue)

thanks for the review
good luck with your stuff.

[The dangers of Running]

Funny

That was pretty good. Sure made me laugh.

Sebbowich responds:

Purpose of the moive filled!

[Frogger Parody]

Could Have Been Good

It's a funny idea, but you stopped for some reason.

You should add more, more places and things that happen.

Yes, this is the part that is the game, but there are still the turtles and alligators in the water to deal with.

WitoldKawalec responds:

Maybe i do a new version, i take off the turtles but dont know de reason.

[Russian Barber School]

Pretty Good

That was a good Flash. Too bad about losing that file.

biocarrotproductions responds:

Well, it does suck, i spent nearly a month on it, oh well, im planning on Remaking it in August.

-Biological Carrot Productions