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[l'Hiver Blanc - Part1]

COOL!

That was really neat, man. Lots of workd went into this, I can tell.

I understand you wanted the music going the whole time, but voices would have been nice. The song was cool though.

At points I was reading and when I was done and looked up the scene changed. Like when he was fighting the dragon. =(

Also, at the VERY end you mis-clipped and I can see the background at the top. Might want to fix that a bit.

Great movie! 5/5!

sanguprod responds:

Thank for your review. I ve added sound FX and Voices on this work.
I hope it will be good.
ps: What you see at the very end , its nothing. its just the preloader.

[Dread]

Neat

That was not bad. Good to see you put a lot of work into it and didn't release a piece of crap.

I did notice a glaring issue though. Your screen was bigger than you flash. I could see your man's legs walking under the Flash because you had a border discrepency. There is about a half inch of white background on the top and bottom of your Flash. That needs fixing.

It may have come when you uploaded. You could have put in the wrong size. Also, it may just be from the Flash itself and you used a screen that was bigger than the Flash you drew.

Good Flash though, but be sure to replace the file with a fix later.

blablablablah responds:

That's right, i had some proplems with taht in the start, but it's fixed now.

[Goin' Down To Newgrounds]

Hehe

Nice one. Too bad that other guy already released a movie by the same name. Sucks to follow him up.

It's still a good Flash though. I liked it.

Teee-Haych responds:

Thanks, the other guys kicked ass, as he obviously spent a lot more time than I did :D

[PTFA Guy: Christmas Short]

HAHA!

That was pretty funny, man!

Only thing is you need to give credit to the artists who perform the songs.

Ryan-Smith responds:

Rockapella did the Carmen Sandiego song and I have no idea who sang Rockin Around the Christmas Tree. Thanks for the review.

[Zelda: Heroic Rage 7]

GREAT!

I'm not like that other guy, I don't want some re-hash.

This is a really great Flash of Zelda that isn't a spoof. An actual, serious Flash with great action and story.

There is editing work that still needs to be done on this one (like the last tear fell, but stayed on the screen) but the movie and story are too good to really dig on small things. Cleaning them up would make this REALLY a great movie though.

This is also the first of your series I have seen and it stands on its own.

GREAT JOB! 5/5!!!

SolidSacketh responds:

Yeah i thought about getting rid of that tear...Truth is, the physics of the tear kept it where it fell. Thanks for the great review! I missed NG man!

[Legend without Zelda BOD2]

Cool animation

Looks like you use a heavy dose of tweens to animate. How's that work for you? Is it easier than frame by frame?

I was thinking of doing this very type of animation for my next Flash and was wondering how time-consuming this form is compared to fbf.

Your reply would be great.

As for the Flash it was pretty darn funny. I like how Link was being done over by the villagers and there was a lot of llittle jokes throughout the whole Flash.

Great job!

RogerregoRRoger responds:

Tweens are easier and faster then FBF, however FBF is more stylisher and provides more freedom.

[Landing in a Flash Can]

Not Good

That was pretty bad. Not really something to enjoy. So many random things that don't really make any sense at all with the song you picked. Oh, and the song... awful.

I had to 0/5 you. As for this not being your first animation... do you really want to brag about that?

Veltri responds:

"So many random things that don't really make any sense at all with the song you picked. Oh, and the song... awful."

That was kind of the point, but if it's not to your taste then that's fine by me. The song IS awful, that's what makes it funny to listen to, at least for me anyway. And regarding this not being my first animation; the badly cut-up style of the whole thing is a trademark of the Animutation genre. I was going for a similar look to Andrew Kepple's 'French Erotic Film', so it wouldn't have looked right if I had hand-drawn everything.
Thanks for watching anyways; this was a one-off and my other entries will be quite far-removed from it.

[Canvas Lock Intro]

Hmmm...

It was well-drawn and the animation was not too bad at all.

But, this was all pretty pointless. Just seemed like a reason to swear and that made it really boring.

incative-account responds:

:'(

[A Snowman's Tale]

Good

That was not bad at all for a first try. My first Flash will be hitting store shelves... er... NG in a day or so myself. Good to see your got a decent reception.

The speed was a bit slow, but still ok. I liked your sounds and it's good to see you learned from animating. That's how I had to do it too. hehe.

Anyway, good luck in the future and I'm sure they wil;l get even better. =)

3/5

Tolomus responds:

Thanks for your comments... I'll be sure to check your flash out when its ready:)

[CC - Clockification]

Funny

You have humor and pretty good animation too. It's too bad you're going to be a clock now... they're kind of dumb honestly. Especially after I looked back at some of your previous work. Don't give in, man!!

The sound was a bit bad at the beginning as the speach was softer than the music. Also, when he fell into the hole, it would have been nice if you had another layer of white at the bottom of the hole on the screen so it would look like he actually fell in. The way it was done, you saw him on-screen and he didn't actually fall in.

It was a good flash though. I gave it a 3/5. Just get away from the clocks. And, yes, I expect clock-lovrs to hit the "no" button below because they 'love clocks' for some reason.

Gregosan responds:

Thanks for the advice!

I didn't leave LL, I just join the CC for fun,