RSQViper's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Time in a Bottle]

Nice Job

I have ultimate respect for people who do FBF to this level. You did a great job and your drawings were actually really good.

Great!

Gate-keeper-girl responds:

-Bows-
FBF is my addiction. I can't stay still XD

^_^

[The Building Jumper]

Wow, this was actually very entertaining

For something that was so... amateur, this was great.

At times it could have been faster, but it held my attention. You had a lot of funny things and you didn't take yourself too serious.

BJ WAS amazing, though. I mean, he kept coming to life and that's pretty amazing in itself. You did a good job with some of the fbf and the Earth explosion was actually REALLY good.

I would say that the Extras should not loop back to min menu. I had to keep going in them to watch them.

Great job overall!

cavpollo responds:

I thought that, but I was too lazy to fix it, hehe.
Tanx for the commentaries.

[NG Profehshinal Advert]

Not Bad

That was ok, man. Graphics were average, bu ti twas kind of funny. This kind of thing seems to be done a lot lately, but I lik ehow you did it in a PSA-type of way.

Decent. Good job.

adman responds:

Ill improve the gfx next time :D

Thanks for the review!

[Magician]

REALLY Neat!

Well, I didn't see the other one you made so I checked it out. I twas ok, but a good idea.

What surprises me though is the HUGE difference in animation from that one to now. This one is done so well. The animation is smooth, you have great sound FX and Visual FX. It's also very funny and plenty long enough. Some of the skits were VERY funny.

The one with the all the safes was priceless. "Cake!" *Punch!* *Slam! Slam! Slam!*

Hahaha! Very nice!

Jaded989 responds:

:) glad you saw the improvement. thanks for the review.

[NG Welcome 2008]

Oh, man. Nice!

I htough tI had seen this, but I didn't.

You did good, man. Especially for a 1st released Flash.

I would say don't use such a low fps again. What was it, 10? Try going with 20 or more from now on for smoother animating. If it's mostly tweens it really doesn't make a difference anyway and make s big difference.

Anyway, I liked the BG a lot. I hope you drew all that (obviously not the tank) because the BG and the moon, sky, land was all really, really good.

Well done!

aldlv responds:

thanx a lot... I really take a lot of time doing the backgrounds... is almost as the tankmen backgrounds
was 12 fps...
next time it will be awesome... thax a lot

[Paper Mario Parody One]

Not Bad

Well, the animation and Mario were good, but it wasn't funny at all.

Austin123 responds:

What not funny :( , haha yeah I admit this wasnt funny but the pipe problem one ad to be my best one

[Joey Stick 3]

It wasn't too bad, really.

It could DEFINITELY use some sound FX, though.

I also feel like you used blur a bit too much in the very beginning. Basically the bike was the focal point and should not have been blurred. I know blur is fun, but take it easy.

The fight was short, but not too bad, but then the guy on the pipe just... disappeared. Seems like a mistake to me.

Anyway, decent job, keep trying.

Toady1104 responds:

I don't put sound cuz it's very short and ok, I'll try to use less blur next time xD

[YoinK's Newgrounds]

HAHAHA

This was really funny, man.

Really good job using the characters and stuff. I also like when you used your hands to talk.

YoinK responds:

thanks dude, glad you liked it.

[A Beautiful Life]

What the...

This was somewhat incredible!

I don't know how you did it, but whenever I use the blur effect it makes everything lag horribly. This had ZERO lag!?! Did you use ActionScript instead or something?

In any case, this was great. The effects you had were awesome and I am stunned.

I only wish it was longer.

fourchinnigan responds:

I used After Effects and Flash. It was all composited in After Effects and output to video. You are watching a video inside of a Flash file. That being said, there ARE ways to do blurs in Flash. Before Flash had blurs, I used to make them by exporting images from Flash, blurring them in Photoshop, then reimporting them into Flash. You may want to try that.

[Disk extermination]

Great

That was a lot of fun to watch.

It started out pretty simple enough, but then you got into some cool action. All in black and white, too and it still looked great.

NOBU777 responds:

Thank you!