RSQViper's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Situation 0: Halloween]

You Tried...

but unfortunately you failed. Basically, you made a flash and didn't use flash. I mean, there was no animation except for a leaf that floats by.

I was looking forward to a good Haloween flash and I got this which (unfortunately) was a bad video with no animation and some bad poetry to a bad song.

If you're learning flash, that's one thing, but this really didn't have anything to bring to Newgrounds because it was not imaginative or anything new to look at.

Good luck on your next try though. I have a feeling this is getting blammed into oblivion though... :(

Trippy-Hippie responds:

im new at flash, ok.
im gonna say this the last time... "Situation 0 is not supposed to have animation. i is supposed to be still pictures like a book."
and im sorry if my poem was bad because i did it when i was half asleep.
I made this within an hour, and i didnt expect anything more than it getting extremely insulted or blammed.

[Movement]

Very Nice

I see you are putting things together here. I am in hopes that you did a lot of little things as you are learning so you can make a story short or something like that. Either that or you just did it for fun.

In any case it was very imaginative and fun to watch and I really like stuff like this.

GOOD JOB!

[Kanye West: Hurricane]

Good gimmic

I don't agree with what Kanye West said either. When you're in that position, you don't use it to spread whatever feelings you have to the general public.

As for Bush hating black people, that is ludacris. It isn't because they are poor like someone below said or anything like that. It is took time to get there because all power is gone, bridges were destroyed and there was little to no cimmunication.

Things take time and unfortunately the guy in charge of FEMA sucked. He's to blame, not Bush.

Good flash. Very funny.

The-WalrusZ responds:

true.

[Candy]

Very nicely done!

I really liked the whole style of that and the creepiness you had. It was a relatively simple animation, but it served its purpose.

Only gripe is near the end there is a long pause of black with no writing or picture. Small gripe, the rest was very good.

Keep up the good work.

[Jot + Jab Episode 1]

VERY nicely done

I reallylike this, man. The choices you make for them (not too many, but enough to make it interesting and funny), the style, the humor, the fact there seems to be a story line.

You have a gemon your hands here, pleaae keep making these as this is the best thing I've seen on this site so far.

[The Bad Sign]

Not bad AND funny

Hey, pretty good shot, man. It had a funny ending and it was an overall very good job especially for your first sprite flash with 3 days work.

I'm sure future ones will be even better.

[Batman : The Red Hood]

Good idea, bad acting

I liek the idea, but the poor voice acting kills it. When the guy in the red hat talks it is totally lifeless as you find very often in these flash animations. The same goes for the cop. It was like he whispered the word 'freeze'. You had the laugh though.

The animation was very good though but there were spots (like when batman was swinging) where a sound effect of the running or something would have been nice since the music at that point was very quiet.

Gus-Saldanha responds:

Of course its lifeless man, the guy has no life, no motivation, its almost over for him. Everything happens for a reason.

[Magical Trevor 3]

Yikes

You do need an ending so we know it's over. Otherwise it looks like it just plays over and over.

Other than that it's good, but random.

[Cemetery Polka]

erm...

I don't really know what to say...

I didn't really care for the song, but the animation was ok. I know these things take some serious work so I'm not going to slam you. It just wasn't my taste, I guess.

One thing was the pictures went fast and the sound was not that great. At least the singing. In that, I mean it was hard to understand so I needed to read and not pay as much attention to what was going on.

starkravenmadd responds:

Yes they take work, and withing a contest timeline (4 weeks) you have to work quick.. :)
the thing flying by fast was on purpose.. its ment to be watched several times.. try it again! thanks..

[Who Goes There? Part 2]

Hey, I like this

This is pretty neat. I like short stories with cliff hangers. the action you had was good and was even well-done. The effects were good and there seems to be a developing story.

Keep up the good work.

GrimEntertainment responds:

well its a developing story, and the story will get going in later parts! Thanks and really glad you liked it!