RSQViper's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The 12 Days of Christmas]

Nice

I liked this quite a bit. I just noticed two things needing tweeking.

The pary where the Lords-a-leaping scream "Yahoo" is too loud as they drown out the singing voice and it really is quite loud.

Also, at the end you wrote "preformed by" where it should say "performed by".

As far as the song goes it's always been an odd song, but it was neat to see how you animated and drew your rendition.

Good job! 4/5

[l'Hiver Blanc - Part1]

COOL!

That was really neat, man. Lots of workd went into this, I can tell.

I understand you wanted the music going the whole time, but voices would have been nice. The song was cool though.

At points I was reading and when I was done and looked up the scene changed. Like when he was fighting the dragon. =(

Also, at the VERY end you mis-clipped and I can see the background at the top. Might want to fix that a bit.

Great movie! 5/5!

sanguprod responds:

Thank for your review. I ve added sound FX and Voices on this work.
I hope it will be good.
ps: What you see at the very end , its nothing. its just the preloader.

[Dread]

Neat

That was not bad. Good to see you put a lot of work into it and didn't release a piece of crap.

I did notice a glaring issue though. Your screen was bigger than you flash. I could see your man's legs walking under the Flash because you had a border discrepency. There is about a half inch of white background on the top and bottom of your Flash. That needs fixing.

It may have come when you uploaded. You could have put in the wrong size. Also, it may just be from the Flash itself and you used a screen that was bigger than the Flash you drew.

Good Flash though, but be sure to replace the file with a fix later.

blablablablah responds:

That's right, i had some proplems with taht in the start, but it's fixed now.

[Goin' Down To Newgrounds]

Hehe

Nice one. Too bad that other guy already released a movie by the same name. Sucks to follow him up.

It's still a good Flash though. I liked it.

Teee-Haych responds:

Thanks, the other guys kicked ass, as he obviously spent a lot more time than I did :D

[Osama Bin Laden Dies.]

TAKE THAT, OSAMA!

The button sucks at the beginning, but I clicked it a ton and it finally went. I have a bad feeling most will give up after clicking it once or twice...

Cool movie though. if it gets blammed that's why. Just fix it and it'll work. If you need help, email me.

[MDay : Milano Wants You !]

NICE

I liked the movie a lot, but I really wish people would get away from using that type of voice. It takes any real feeling to a movie out of it.

Everything else was great though.

[PTFA Guy: Christmas Short]

HAHA!

That was pretty funny, man!

Only thing is you need to give credit to the artists who perform the songs.

Ryan-Smith responds:

Rockapella did the Carmen Sandiego song and I have no idea who sang Rockin Around the Christmas Tree. Thanks for the review.

[people vs zombies part2]

Issues

The idea isn't bad, but I'd say it's poorly executed.

The The sounds don't always go with the action. Also, you did not compress audio so the file is FAR bigger than it should be. The whole thing is also pretty slow.

[Midget:Impossible Part 2]

Pretty Good

This and the other were both pretty good movies and front page quality.

Parts of both were lackluster though. The story really dragged on in places.

The animation, especially with mouths, was not that great either. Probably because you had to go with a lower fps rate to fit the movies into just two.

The drawing was absolutely GREAT though! You have a great hand at it. You might want to think about colabbing with someone where you draw up all the scenes and characters and they animate them. I see real success in that.

I also appreciate all the things you had going on in the background, like Pong in "Fat Dick's". That stuff was pretty funny to see.

Good job on this and keep up the good work!

[Zelda: Heroic Rage 7]

GREAT!

I'm not like that other guy, I don't want some re-hash.

This is a really great Flash of Zelda that isn't a spoof. An actual, serious Flash with great action and story.

There is editing work that still needs to be done on this one (like the last tear fell, but stayed on the screen) but the movie and story are too good to really dig on small things. Cleaning them up would make this REALLY a great movie though.

This is also the first of your series I have seen and it stands on its own.

GREAT JOB! 5/5!!!

SolidSacketh responds:

Yeah i thought about getting rid of that tear...Truth is, the physics of the tear kept it where it fell. Thanks for the great review! I missed NG man!