RSQViper's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Paint Ball]

Not too bad

The graphics were outstanding in this. Good job on that.

It was a bit short, but it was a good flash.

[DIG]

Pretty Cool

That was really neat. Very good 3D animation. It's too bad NG limits upload size because the rezolution was really awful on this. Not your fault though, of course.

I liked the whole idea of the story, but at times it just seemed to lose its way. That hard work on the whole thing gets you a high score though, for sure.

Good job. 4/5

[My life trailer]

Hmm...

You have some good graphics and animation in the eyes here, but it is way too short and has no story or talking in it.

Just spend more time on it and make it something people would want to watch. Right now it's just not good enough, but it can be with more effort and a story to make it longer.

[twelve]

A Fair First

That was not bad at all for a first flash.

To fix the music queqe you can just make it so it's first frame is AFTER the preloader/play button frame. Then you don't have to worry about anything. Just put a blank frame in front of it.

The animation was good for a first and the graphics were ok.

To fix the square around the trees, just make a tree on a blank background before you move it. It will make it so there is no square as the only thing it will move when you use the black arrow to mov or copy it, will be the tree itself.

I just released my first a couple days ago, myself. Cool feeling, eh? Glad to see your got through too.

Good luck to you!

[Toothbrushland]

Bleh

You say you are making this for Subway? That makes no sense. Anyway, the humor was bad and I didn't enjoy it at all. I didn't even grin once, unfortunately. But, hey, that's my taste.

The animation was good though as well as the sound.

[A Snowman's Tale]

Good

That was not bad at all for a first try. My first Flash will be hitting store shelves... er... NG in a day or so myself. Good to see your got a decent reception.

The speed was a bit slow, but still ok. I liked your sounds and it's good to see you learned from animating. That's how I had to do it too. hehe.

Anyway, good luck in the future and I'm sure they wil;l get even better. =)

3/5

Tolomus responds:

Thanks for your comments... I'll be sure to check your flash out when its ready:)

[CC - Clockification]

Funny

You have humor and pretty good animation too. It's too bad you're going to be a clock now... they're kind of dumb honestly. Especially after I looked back at some of your previous work. Don't give in, man!!

The sound was a bit bad at the beginning as the speach was softer than the music. Also, when he fell into the hole, it would have been nice if you had another layer of white at the bottom of the hole on the screen so it would look like he actually fell in. The way it was done, you saw him on-screen and he didn't actually fall in.

It was a good flash though. I gave it a 3/5. Just get away from the clocks. And, yes, I expect clock-lovrs to hit the "no" button below because they 'love clocks' for some reason.

Gregosan responds:

Thanks for the advice!

I didn't leave LL, I just join the CC for fun,

[Love me Love me not]

Good, but Lacking

The whole idea is good, but the constant extremely poor sound editing became annoying. Also, some poor graphical editing in places. like when he used the flashlight you moved the character outside the light, not inside it.

Oh, well. A good story, with pretty limited animation. I would have given you a 7 or 8, but the editing really hurt you.

3/5

[Random Ninja Battles]

Very Entertaining

These were both very good. I'd like to see a story put into place that uses this fighting.

The BEST part was in movie 1 when he went in slow motion and shot 2 bullets. Coming out of the slo-mo was awesome.

I also like how you avoid slo-mo and used it VERY sparingly (once, I believe). Most people use it WAY too much. This was perfect.

Keep up the great work! 4/5!

Holo-Alf responds:

Thanks a lot! Like I said, I was gonna put a story in it but started something else. Curse you 3 second attention span!!!

[The Afterlife]

Not Too Shabby

That was not bad at all. I had to give you a 2 on violence because of the forceful pushing... LOL!

Anyway, I liked it, but the music got very annoying afer a while, unfortunately. The story also was very odd in parts.

You did a good job for the most-part telling the story with just animation and no speaking.