RSQViper's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Greedy Granny]

It was OK

Yeah, it was too short, not your fault.

But WHY was it 3,700 Kbs? You didn't compress your audio or something?

Anyway, the graphics were very good. Would be nice if it was longer.

[3 Dudes And A Puppy - Ep1]

Outstanding!

That was really funny! Top 5 for sure!

[UnderDark: The Series]

Empty Trailer

There is no trailer in your trailer. All that I know is it's about three guys. They are heroes. That's it.

You had no action or talking or anything to clue us in on what it could possibly be about so this gets a low score form me since it isn't even doing what it should be doing. Hooking me.

The graphics look very good though and your sound is excellent. I have no idea if you can even animate though because there was none in here except for tweens.

Sorry. Make a better trailer please.

[Clash of Fists Part 2]

Very Well-Done

This is a quality flash right here. Good job!

A few things to help you out:

When doing Spidey's web, make your line smaller. It was really thick. Same with your lines you put over Fatbot and th elines that broke the force shield.

Also, when doing Spidey swinging, make a tween and put him on his own frame. Make the whole tween/symbol him and his web. Then use the tool that manipulates size and shape to MOVE THE CENTER. Then, move the center to the top of the webbing (where the web would be attached to whatever it's attached to). From there, make a tween that swings Spiderman and it will look VERY good. =)

Your use of sound effects were also very good and fit perfectly, I thought.

[HOLD ON]

Yikes

Ok, I understand the message you were trying to convey, but I'm here to critique your flash, so here i go.

I would assume you know things were drawn badly. i also think it was mostly on purpose, but it was just not very good.

There were also many instances where you could have used a little more imagination. Like, when the tear was falling and we were looking down at it before it splatted on the floor. You could have made it getting smaller so we knew it was falling, not just a blue dot that I thought was already where it had landed.

Also, some words seemed to jump as the screen was changing so I think you have either a couple broken tweens or maybe just a mistake when you were going scene-to-scene. I'm not sure.

The song was also not good. I'm not even sure it fit, honestly. And it was annoying.

The tear on the face looked well-animated though and I'd like to see this redone with better graphics and animation. it just looked too thrown-together for my taste.

Bottom Line: Good idea, bad editing, bad representation.

[Legend Of Zelda Part 1]

NEW AND IMPROVED!!!

Good job, man. I'm glad one came through finally that looked good.

I did have one issue though. I couldn't see the words (if there were words) when Link walked into the house. I just saw black boxes. Does this require Flash 8? If so, you should really put that first in description.

Be careful when you continue. It's hard to make a good Link that is serious because it becomes obvious the author is trying too hard.

Good job, and good luck.

3/5

[How to make a good Flash]

NICE

Yeah, this just about sums it up. Nice flash. Very funny.

CLOUD IZ SO KEWL!!1! LOLZ!11

Muffinator responds:

Hehe. Thanks. ^_^

[This isn't funny]

Pretty Good

That was not bad at all. REally good considering it was in one night of animation. It was certainly funny the way it was presented. I'd like to see more of this guy trying to make people laugh if you're even bored at night again.

Keep up the good work.

TheKingofSwing responds:

You never know what nights of boredom might bring me. Last night, it was this. Tonight, who knoooows! Spooky! The wind is howling! A voice from beyooond the grave thanks you for the revieeeeew! ~

[Annabel]

Nicely Done

This was a smart little movie. You made the song too, which is pretty cool. The Flash itself wasn't much to look at, but it seved its purpose and was entertaining.

Only thing about the song was the repetitious chorus line. It grates after a few times hearing it and it's sung quite a few times in the song. Still good though.

Since this is your song, you should upload it to the audio portal for others to use if you'd like to share. Then you can link the two together.

[Pretus Part 1]

You Need to Edit

Your editing is not good at all and it shows. All kinds of mispelled words. There's really no excuse when it's as simple as sending your file to another person to help you out and check your work.

The animation was descent though so if you got your editing down you would make decent Flash.