RSQViper's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[A Day in the Life of Mewd]

Speed It Up

I really liketh eidea of a choose your own adventure. I even have one in the works for far in the future.

But, there's some issues with your Flash here.

For one, the size is too big. I can see things off the side of the screen starting with the preloader.

The speed is also extremely slow.

Putting in a "skip to next choice" button would be really great so we don't have to watch a path we've already done.

When you die after the fridge option at the toilet, it leterally takes about aminute to choose Try Again. That should be shortened greatly.

Overall a really neat idea an dan enjoyable Flash, but speeding it up will make it not so boring as it was a ttimes. Some of the deaths were hilarious, though.

Nicely done, keep on Flashing!

[Secret games in Flash 8]

This was well done!

I liked this. You did a good job.

It was funny when you zoomed in on the "i" in Macromedia that you showed amoeabas because it was so small. hehe.

Anyway, I clicked the dot in my Flash 8, but it all turns white. Not sure what to do or if that's even normal.

Cool tutorial, though!

jeRemias responds:

the amoeabas! xD

about the "white thing": Keep trying, In my case sometimes don´t work very well. But if all turn white definitely somethings happens, and that is good, at least you dont think that im a liar =D

[- Circlo -]

Simple but fun

OMG SO MUCH VIOLENCE!!!11!!one!!

j/k with the 10 violence...

Anyway, this is fun, man! I like it a lot. It had me playing for quite some time.

You've made yourself a gem here. I'd like ot see you build o nit for a - Circlo 2 -. Throw in some different things going on and whatnot, but this alone is a lot of fun.

NICE!

[EscapeDaHouse Part2]

Cool

I like it. I think with this kind of thing graphics are pretty important, so if you beefed them up a bit and added some shading it would be beneficial.

Also, I couldn't findthe last key. I found the part of rug I could pull up, but I never pulled it up enough to see what was behind it.

Also, requireing a password from a previous game will probably hurt more han help your score. I would suggest not having that in the game, but instead just like your old game for people to check out.

I mean, could you imagine having a game at home that you put in to play and it say "sorry, but to continue you have to buy and beat the previous version". Yeah. Bad idea. I cheated and hit PLAY to get past it. Hehe.

But I liked it. Nice job. Still can't find that last key, though....

[Galaxy Defender V 2]

Solid but could be great

I like the song you picked. It wasn't annoying and looped VERY well.

If you added some sound FX and made better explosions I think this would do very well.

As it is, it's a great start and you can learn a lot from it and build from here.

Good Luck!

XpMaxProductions responds:

Thanks, the reason the song loops well is that i edited the end and made it fade and stuff. Sound FX are on my list of things to do as well.

[DS Christmas Quiz]

Nice Quiz

I liked this quiz quite a bit. The music was quite good and the questions were pretty well-thought out. I still don't get how the 1st day of Christmas is the 26th. the day AFTER Christmas Day, but whatever.

I will say that you need to loop the music. It stops if you play too long and I was left there with nothing ot listen to. =(

Great job overall. I like the way you did the buttons, intros to the levels, had extra information and threw in jokes for wrong answers.

5/5!

IceDragon64 responds:

So glad you liked it, I wasn't sure what you would think.
I am told it has something to do with an very old tradition that means the day ends at sunset; Jesus born at night; 25th is the first NIGHT; Jan 5th is the 12th NIGHT Jan 6th is the 12th DAY of Xmas. whatever!
Yes I DO need to loop the music. For some reason the sound wouldn't work so I got help from my DS colleagues, who put the music in a piece of AS and I couldnt make it loop. I need to find out why in htis quiz the sound stopped at stops when it doesn't in my other quizzes. I also need to learn to make sound off buttons, I have asked others for them often enough in my 700 reviews!
Best Wishes,
Ice

[Triforce Keep Up]

Very Cool

I like the game, man. Very fun indeed. Kind of addictive, too.

The graphics have a nice feel and you keep it consistent throughout. The sound is a perfect fit as well and it's an overall very well-made game.

Maybe add some sort of power-up timer? It would be nice to know how long I'll be super fast or slown down because when slow down wears off and all of a sudde I speed past the Triforce... urg. hehehe.

Nice job! You got my 5!

pixelz responds:

Cool! But if you knew when it was gonna go back to normal,,,, well wheres the fun in that ROFL!
Thanks for the review!

[Defend Your Keg!]

Funny

That was decent. It was really easy for a while there. You didn'teven have to move if you're in the right place. I think if they came from four directions there would be more challenge.

But, after a while they just started POURING in and I finally lost my keg. It was a valiant fight, though.

Damn Frat boys!!!

[- U.F.O -]

Neat

I've seen a lot of this type of game. I do like yours, though, but sometimes there were extremely tight squeezes that there were no good way around.

Also, when making a game it's a good idea to have instructions in the game. If they're there, sorry, I didn't see them.

Also, submitting my name didn't seem to do anything.

[Maze Completer]

Neat Idea

This is definitely a neat idea you've got here. It makes you think and you just can't go smashing thru a maze, you have to think before you move.

I was having control issues, though. The movement was funky. It would go 2 squares sometimes if I tapped the arrow and sometimes it wouldn't move at all.

Very cool idea, though. keep working at it and improving.

omarshaaban responds:

thanx very much and ya u must click a a very light click to move on square i will fix that!!!
and ya i will improve it and add a map generator!