RSQViper's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[bestest fiter-trailer-]

Fix It

You need to learn how to condense your sound. Condense it, then replace the file. It should only be like 800 kb.

Ramirezoid responds:

once again, i forgot to stream.

[HarryPotter short]

Cool

That was actually very good.

The song was just getting going, so it really feels like there should be more.

Add to it, make it around the same length as the song and you're going to get a very high score!

Great what you had, though.

Good luck!

yoyoman92 responds:

Thanks for the advice! I'll try as hard as I can to make it more lengthy. I don't know if I can make it as long as the song, but it's worth a try.

[FBF Double Feature]

I like!

Pretty cool stuff. It would be nice if there were some music playing, though. It's a bit plain without it.

The Red on Black was very short, though compared to the White on Black. both were good, though. =)

Keep up the good work!

[Mountains]

Very Cool Stick

I like how you could tell where the sticks were seemingly looking. Like when the guy had the bomb in his hand, it was obvious he was looking at it before it exploded.

I do wish there was more of a complete ending. Like a pose or something. The way it is, just cutting off the music makes it seem somewhat incomplete.

Very good job, though. I like it quite a bit.

[Fill The VoiD..]

Wow

That was actually really neat. I saw a couple graphical errors here and there (like when the moths were flying around you can see a wehite space between the ground and the tree), but the movie was pretty fun to watch.

It wasn't predictable and there wasn't any real repetativeness in it so it kept me interested.

Nice job. Really nice job.

[Fairly Short Shorts #1]

HAHA!!!

Hey, that's a Simpson's joke, you THIEF!!!

LOL!!! What was up with that guy?

Well, once again one of my favorite artists puts out a gem of a comedy. I like how short it was. Sometimes shorts are the funniest things.

Check out my Flash I uploaded the same day, too. Bad Flash Kills. I think it's something you would appreciate.

So soda cans to the nuts, though.... =( Maybe next time.

Awesome job once again! ((Make an Abe 3))

[Slash Returns]

EPIC

HAHA! That was a funny story. All told with but one picture. Amazing.

And as for you being surprised it passed, I think it had to be the music. You see, you used the music from "Oh, Savior!" so you subconsciously made people hit a passing score.

Genius.

SlashFirestorm responds:

Heh, yeah. It's funny...I've put much more effort into flash that's been blammed...and yet this, which I whipped together in an hour (a good chunk of which was merely finding the music), passes.

The music CERTAINLY was the big factor. I did original intend to use the short version of "Escape", aka "The Savior Song", but I found the longer one first, and it's much more grandiose...

Let this be a lesson to all beginner flash artists like me: never underestimate the importance of good sound!

Thanks for the review! ^_^

[Mindblowing trailer!!]

HOLY ****

That was so damn funny!!

Great job. It was hard to not burst out laughing here at work.

SSHHHhhhhh...... 5/5!

[Me Vs DBZ]

LOL!

Man, you need to hang your head in shame after that.

I mean, you were looking at the camera the ENTIRE time.

[Rock Stars Episode One]

Really Great!

This was pretty damn funny, man! And you gotta' love the RvB reference!

Ah, but you want feedback. Hmmm... here you go.

Graphics: They were really well-drawn. I like the style. They had that bitmap issue, though, so I'm guessing they were imported? I don't know the proper term, but at times with the backgrounds and characters the graphics looked a little screwy. Kind of like when you save a JPG as a GIF in paint, but not as bad. Still, it was good and not distracting (except when it was on that guy's nose).

Style: I like your style. The eyes have great expression. It also has a fun feel to it which makes it that much better to watch. The different ways you went from scene to scene were funny too. Gotta love the bra flying at the screen!

Sound: The sounds were great. Clean sounding speach, good use of FX and music.

Violence: N/A

Interactivity: Play button. 2/10

Humor: Pretty damn funny. Good style of humor. Great interaction with characters and characters with each other made for good punchlines and believeable comedy. 9/10.

Overall: A really great animation. Portal Award wrthy, for sure. 10/10!

Now, take a week off from animating! Go see the outdoors and breath the clean air.

Antrock responds:

That's the best thing I've heard all day. I will.