RSQViper's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Who Goes There? Part 6]

Great Stuff

I've seen all your movies and you've got a great story going here. This one is no exception.

Your graphical style is also really good. You keep the story fresh and interesting in each movie adn there's always some sort of twist. The action is directed very well and the whoel exploding part was very nicely done.

Great job! 5/5!

[Sesame Street Fun Time]

HAHA!

That was really funny.

I voted on this yesterday and didn't even realise you were the artist. Then today I get a mail that you released and here it was again.

That Bert and Ernie was hilarious! Oscar and Grover kissing was rather disturbing. Elmo as Hitler was funny. The Bert holding the kid one was... not so good.

Overall very funny, though. You put things out so fast it's hard to keep up!

4/5!

["Turd of the Week"]

Yep

Thi is exactly right, too. Those things are mass voted through the portal and then their scores sink like stones as the rest of NG votes them where they should be.

Then they end up with turd of the week.

People who submit like that should get their IP addresses banned for spamming the portal.

KKyuubi responds:

Also, only YOU can prevent bad entries from reaching the portal, see that button with a sad Pico and the number 0 on it? Use it!

[A visit by Ragin'Brain]

Nice Job!

For one of your first, that was really great! it was great even if it wasn't your first.

I like how it switched up the pace like that.

I also really like the style you use with drawing your characters. Very well-done.

4/5

[TooF Military Intel]

Humm...

I'm not one to get on all the hype or... anti-hype, but I've gon eback and watched all your TooF episodes. they just aren't that funny, honestly. Fart jokes and bleeped swears. That about sums it up.

I do feel that all the bad press you've been getting is way over the top. It's not that big of a deal if you have a certain way to animate. Hell, tweening cuts way down on time and time is of the essence. I know I put tons more hours into each one of my Flashes and I have no reason to be pissed at you, that makes no sense. I wish I could go a LOT faster.

I do wish you would spice things up a bit, though. Less bleeps (they seriously get annoying after a little while), more detail in the teeth and mouth, maybe even a few more voices. The VA Forums have great voice actors. Get some female voices over there to switch some things up.

I like the commentary option, but it went on a bit long. The answering back to fans was cool, but also a bit long.

Good luck to you. I hope you can find a new niche for these teeth and what they do. A trip to the dentist, brushing, eating... Something. Think of all the things our mouth does and try to encorporate one here and there.

3/5.

[Imaginary Friend]

Incredible

I've never seen a Flash that evoked emotion from me before.

You did an awesome job with this. Congratulations, and thank you as well.

~RSQ

[Fall Of Nintendo]

Godo Job!

This was an extremely aggresive shot at Flash animation. The story was long, there was a lot you had to do yourself aside form sprites.

I feel that there is some work left to be done for Part 2, though. Like the way the captions are done. There's definiely a better way with the words on the bottom of the screen in a black box. Also when tweening in and out at times you stetched things wide, then tall so it was kind of a rubberband effect.

The virus had a cool effect. I love the feel of when the guy with the hands was talking and it zoomed out to the HUGE VIRUS area. What a cool effect that was!

Best of luck on part 2. you got my 5/5 with this just because of the storyline.

Veneox responds:

Thank you.

[[2006] NES Dreams]

Cool

I remember playing Nemo the Dream Master. That game was friggin' HARD, man!

I like what you did with it. You used the music and had a very dream-like setting. Quite cool.

4/5

[Crazy Music Video]

Good

This was good, but you didn't lip sync at all and it really stoof out. You merely used a loop for his mouth.

I like the style of everything else. Very interesting to watch. Some great effects and an engaging storyline.

[Death Egg Zone - Act X]

Awesome First Flash!

A definite thumbs-up from me! If this is a first Flash, I can't be much more impressed.

It's obvious you put tons of work into this. You added sound FX, you had music going in the background, you even worked the camera pretty well.

I will say that you need to get your scene transitions down a little better. Sometimes there was a white flash in between. Just count your frames and make sure there are none empty in between sequences.

Very good first Flash. I gave it a 4/5! Awesome job!

Peckham responds:

yeah,maybe using the masking technique would have been good,and,the white flash was ment X3 it was suppose to be suspense lol