RSQViper's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Flash for Kylie]

It started good...

It really started good. I mean, it was fun to watch. You had some really cool effects going onand a cool song so I know you have talent.

Anyway, after all the cool stuff, you ran out of ideas right around when you started saying "Circles! Square. See it!" Then you had Bill Gates' floating torso and the whole Flash lots it.

Cool stuff, man. Try to stick with it next time for an awesome flash, because the beginning WAS awesome.

Psionic-Storm responds:

I drew on impulse, ^^;;, next time I'll try to plan things out...

[|~HappyPartyDreamDance~|]

Cool

I saw the last one. Glad you got this one to work.

As far as the loop, on the last frame to a goto and play on the frame right aft the PLAY button.

[Bills Adventures EPS 2]

HAHAHA!!

This is a classic example of funny story is more important than graphics. Although your graphics weren't bad at all.

Very funny stuff in here and you never knew what was going to happen. The lead character was hilarious the way he talked and your animation was very good. Like when he was running, that was done well.

Nicely done. You get my 5.

Psychotic-Dan responds:

Thanks Alot i'll be sure to do better
with my graphics and animation as Bill
goes on. LONG LIVE BILL!.. LOL!

[Duck Luck Episode #7]

Random Humor

Well, it's random, but sometimes it seems a bit forced. Still, it's got somefunny parts. Mostly the guy in the dress had all the funny lines.

I also noticed that you hands are backwards at times. That odd dude's hand on the far side, his palm faced the camera, but his thumb was on the wrong side. Nota biggie, just something I noticed.

I've seen a few of these and this one is a decent addition. Not hilarious, but funny and the graphics are very smooth with good animation. Nicely done overall.

[Bamboo - Air Mail]

Funny

I like it. The idea is funny and you get the point accross well. With more practice your animation will be smoother as well.

Also, when the words came on the screen it was obvious that you missed some fills with red. To fix that and avoid it entirely, just make a seperate layer for the red and you won't have the problem or the fristration of having to fill in every little area.

It was funny and I look forward to more. Good luck!

[Mario's Mushrooms]

Cool

I like the idea and it's obvious you tried hard.

The first jokes were pretty lame, but when you made him look fat you did a very good job.

You need to work hard on your sprites in making htem the right width. May times they were changing width and height for no apparent reason other than you tweened them poorly.

Also, have your music be a loop. It stopped and then there was no music.

Nice shot, it shows there's quality to come and I feel this is a passible Flash.

Keep going! 3/5

['Rijj' Ep #1 PREVIEW]

Needs More

It's not much of a pilot, really.

I mean, there's hardly a joke in it, but the animation seems ok, but the only animation is the lip syncing.

If this is a pilot there needs to be more. As it is I have NO clue what the actual Flash Movie will be about by watching this.

Also, the credits at the end are WAY too slow. Speed your credits up next time otherwise it seems over on the first set of them.

Good luck and try hard on the actual Flash, but I didn't enjoy this.

crushy responds:

Ok, thanks for the input.

["Get A God" #3]

Funny Again!

I really like how well you get the flow going in these. It sounds like an actual commercial and it makes a good point.

Good lip-syncing as well.

Keep it rolling, man! Nice job!

Cambo responds:

Cheers buddy, lipsyncing is one of those annoying, timewasting jobs that people only notice if you do poorly.

[Ed gets the daily news]

Shows Promise

It's ok. you really need to learn how to use multiple layers and then use tweens on things. If you tweened the house and trees across the screen as your penguin walked it would look a LOT smoother.

As it is, it's cool you find a way around words, the graphics are subpar, but not awful and it's a neat story that could be made better with better animation.

The music, though clear, was pretty annoying.

2/5

[The Rock Lee Chronicles]

Awesome Sprite

That is definitely one of the best sprite movies I've ever seen.

You had some really great effects in there and it's obvious you spent a TON of time making this.

The action was awesomely done and I like the way you did the speach with the scrolls.

5/5