RSQViper's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[XXXI 1 : Outcast]

Really Good

Well, this was a cool film.

You had an interesting storyline and some ok action. I like th esettings you used and I'd say that your backgrounds were really good.

The actual animation of the characters was stiff, though. Also, during the fighting scenes, you need to use more than just swishing sounds. You need clanks and clunks for swords hitting each other and armour and squishes for cutting someone, etc.

Using masking will help you as well to make it actually look like a sword is going into someone. It's a surprisingly easy effect.

Oh, and the option of picking character fight scenes was cool. =)

Blakant responds:

Respond From StillBeatingPictures :

Thank you for your honest opinion, in the next episode we will add more sounds, mask the characters attacks, amoung other things, thanks for your review.

[Battle between 2]

Not Bad

That was pretty good, man.

The reason the music cuts short is you don't have it set to stream. Set it to stream in Flash and upload it again and it will be fine. =)

Big-Nose responds:

Ok thanks... erm... Ill get to that once I get my computer fixed then...

[Time in a Bottle]

Nice Job

I have ultimate respect for people who do FBF to this level. You did a great job and your drawings were actually really good.

Great!

Gate-keeper-girl responds:

-Bows-
FBF is my addiction. I can't stay still XD

^_^

[The Building Jumper]

Wow, this was actually very entertaining

For something that was so... amateur, this was great.

At times it could have been faster, but it held my attention. You had a lot of funny things and you didn't take yourself too serious.

BJ WAS amazing, though. I mean, he kept coming to life and that's pretty amazing in itself. You did a good job with some of the fbf and the Earth explosion was actually REALLY good.

I would say that the Extras should not loop back to min menu. I had to keep going in them to watch them.

Great job overall!

cavpollo responds:

I thought that, but I was too lazy to fix it, hehe.
Tanx for the commentaries.

[TT: 001 Rabbits]

Very Interesting

That was fun to watch.

At no point in hearing the music would I have thought rabbits, but you did (for some reason). It worked!

I really like how you kept changing it and that rabbit that was singing the "ooh ooh" part was really funny.

Nice job, good movie.

[Hotride - The Prodigy]

Cool

This was actually pretty cool. Very amateur, but for a first flash it's actually really good.

I like how you took the video to a level and started leaving Earth. I like that you pushed that dude out and he landed on a cloud. Also, was it jus tme or did that guy look like "The Scream" by MC Escher? Pretty cool.

I would say that you used the speech balloons too much.

Nice, NICE job once again. Keep practicing and improving.

[NG Profehshinal Advert]

Not Bad

That was ok, man. Graphics were average, bu ti twas kind of funny. This kind of thing seems to be done a lot lately, but I lik ehow you did it in a PSA-type of way.

Decent. Good job.

adman responds:

Ill improve the gfx next time :D

Thanks for the review!

[the real halo (short)]

Hmm... Humm... HUMMMM.....

Well, it started out kinda' lame. The jokes weren't that great and it seemed kinda forced, but the unsuspected ending made the whole Flash worth the watch.

I'd suggest working on graphical presentation a little more next time as this was just alright, borderline amateur graphics. Especially for something so short and only having 2 characters.

[Magician]

REALLY Neat!

Well, I didn't see the other one you made so I checked it out. I twas ok, but a good idea.

What surprises me though is the HUGE difference in animation from that one to now. This one is done so well. The animation is smooth, you have great sound FX and Visual FX. It's also very funny and plenty long enough. Some of the skits were VERY funny.

The one with the all the safes was priceless. "Cake!" *Punch!* *Slam! Slam! Slam!*

Hahaha! Very nice!

Jaded989 responds:

:) glad you saw the improvement. thanks for the review.

[NG Welcome 2008]

Oh, man. Nice!

I htough tI had seen this, but I didn't.

You did good, man. Especially for a 1st released Flash.

I would say don't use such a low fps again. What was it, 10? Try going with 20 or more from now on for smoother animating. If it's mostly tweens it really doesn't make a difference anyway and make s big difference.

Anyway, I liked the BG a lot. I hope you drew all that (obviously not the tank) because the BG and the moon, sky, land was all really, really good.

Well done!

aldlv responds:

thanx a lot... I really take a lot of time doing the backgrounds... is almost as the tankmen backgrounds
was 12 fps...
next time it will be awesome... thax a lot