AGAIN???
This is the second time today YOU have submitted this. Stop it.
You already HAVE it here on newgrounds, what is the issue?
It's good, but not so good we need it here 100 times.
AGAIN???
This is the second time today YOU have submitted this. Stop it.
You already HAVE it here on newgrounds, what is the issue?
It's good, but not so good we need it here 100 times.
Very Funny
This was great. Your comedy was so different from spot to spot, but it worked well together.
The story was really good, the animation was smooth and the jokes ket coming.
Well done!
NICE, Andrea!
I know you're really new at this and this is good for someone so new.
Some of the FBF was really good, so well-done! Nice effects and I can't believe you did it all in an hour?? Wow, that's fast.
Thanks, I had some help though, hence the co authors. Umm, I am really starting to blush now... Anyway I appreciate your feedback!
Very Fun Watch
This was a lot of fun to watch, man.
I like the dream sequencing at the beginning and how places changed to other places like dreams often do. Also, the stars were an awesome effect!
Great writing and animating!
The stars were a surprisingly easy effect as well, it's just a movieclip inside a movie clip inside a movie clip, one movieclip stretching or rotating another. :)
The Return of Robot City!
Nothing lik ea good ol' rap battle to get my day started.
I like the cameo by duck. Nice way to sneak him in there. The 50 cent Moose was funny and the whole Flash was longer than I expected it to be.
Also, the announcer at the end was super-sexy. You should give him a raise.
5/5!
Thanks.
And I am even considering making new ducks.
Not TOO bad...
You definitely need to do a little homework before you start making these.
Like, your bullet you used was the bullet AND the casing. The casing generally ejects at the gun and is never fired. Only the bullet is fired.
The story looks like it could be decent, so good luck with that.
You also need to use stopallsounds and the end of your movie so it doesn't continue into the beginning.
welll I fixed the sound problem before I submitted it but apparently the updated version wasn t the oen submitted so it makes me look totally inexperienced lol. And sorry I REALLY don t know much about guns and bullets but I will try to find out more if I dare do more close up shots. And have a casing fall from the gun. Thanks for the feedback and constructive critisizzim.
Nicely Done
You use blur very well. It certainly adds to your movie instead of using it like a crutch like many artists do.
The action was well-done and you have a good flow for action.
VERY cool!
Well, it was funny and the ending was very cool.
Definitely entertaining, well done. And it wasn't short like you said. 30 seconds was short, this had to be over 2 minutes.
It seemed real shot to me, hmm. Probably watching it over and over becuase I had to test :D
Thanks for the review!
This was Poop-a-riffic!!!
This was really great.
It had personality and was fun. You rooted for the poor hero who just wants to help and be liked, meanwhile no one appreciates getting crapped all over.
Funny and fun. I totally enjoyed the SHIT out of it!
EH?
It was funny sand all over the place to some odd music.
I liked it.
Thank ye.
Dude, where's my Flash?
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