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Dude, where's my Flash?
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I am more than impressed with this, man. You did a great job making it funny and switching it up thruout the Flash so we never knew what to expect.
I really liked the presentation of the credits, too. That was a good idea. Aubrey's video was cool, too the way you did it.
Great job!
Author's Response:
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Glad you enjoyed it!
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This is awful and with no sound it's much worse.
Both of your submissions today have no sound. When you import them into Flash why would you NOT add sound FX?
You should do that.
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I made everything except the backgrounds with flash. The backgrounds I used with adobe.
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Well, not much more to add than I already wrote in Ep 1, but that the action was great in this.
It's obvious you take a lot of time working on things and you keep the movie interesting and use LOTS of sprites and sprite effects.
Nicely done. Very nicely done.
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Thanks
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Now, I may be wrong and forgetting, but I have seen this before and you did a lot to upgrade the movie. You have a new intro, menu and your next buttons are different.
The movie is quite good and you are definitely good with sprites. I can only imagine you improving from here.
I guess things to change in your next released Flash is not so many stops. Like, you could stop each time we hit the levels and that was a bit annoying. I think you could take the graphic you created to highlight them and make it Flash instead of stopping. You also need to double-check spelling, line up fonts and use a specific format on how you do things in your Flash.
Example Card how you put it.:
Yoshi rider
Info: Fast in ofensive
Hard in defensive
Attack's: Trow egg (you misspelled "Throw")
Attack 2: eat enemy
Attack 3: lick punch
How is should be:
Name: Yoshi Rider (Capitalize each word)
Info: Fast in Offensive
Hard in Defensive
Attack 1: Throw Egg
Attack 2: Eat Enemy
Attack 3: Lick Punch
Anyway, there you go. That's just one card, but most of your cards had misprints and all looked like they needed a format to follow.
Also, after all those things were introduced, at some point there was a frame that had typing that didn't pause.
Also, PLEASE don't delete this even if you redo it. Make the next one version 2 or something. It's good. Don't delete it. In fact, it's not worth making this again, just learn from it and keep going.
I also enjoyed your music selection. You had some cool music in here and some odd versions of popular songs... =)
Author's Response:
Thanks,
I fear I will not make another version of this movie because this movie is a verion 4, the only what I can do is to make modyficacions in next movie, it is nice that you like it,
I m not understant what you mean about stoping:
" I guess things to change in your next released Flash is not so many stops. Like, you could stop each time we hit the levels and that was a bit annoying. I think you could take the graphic you created to highlight them and make it Flash instead of stopping. "
Well, I do not get it what you mean, do this is somethink with character analisator or somethink else, anyway, thanks again.
Have a nice day.
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Well, it had a lot of promise, but the voice acting was really bad. it kind of killed the whole thing.
Also it was without sound FX in a lot of places it seemed there should have been some.
You had a couple good jokes and some flat ones. Overall it was a good movie. The graphics were pretty good for sure.
Keep it up, just try getting some more SFX in your Flash so it doesn't seem like dead silence when action is taking place (yes I know there was BGM, but that doesn't replace SFX).
Author's Response:
Well the audio was made last year during the summer, and at the time I have had very limited resources, but since then I have gotten more and better equipment for doing things like sound effects. And I have been told a thousand times that I need better voice acting, and Im working on it...
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Well, for using such an old version of Flash, that was good.
It as super simple and I've never liked watching words appear little by little like that (being typed out). I'd rather it was there and I read it and it moved on.
I do like not having to hit a NEXT button as that is what a lot of people resort to and it's just annoying in a movie so it was nice to see you didn't do that.
The pee, though funny, didn't look very good. It was funny when he mooned us, though.
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As short as it was, it was funny. I can only imagine what happened and I like that i was left up to our imagination.
The two graphical styles next to each other was odd. Mostly because it was made by one person. It did make that guy look out of place, but didn't take from the Flash too much.
Nice job.
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I think you did SO much better on this one than last time.
You had some cool ideas like having Jesus puking blood and that large guy was a cool character. When he made that guy grind and squish on the wall, that was really cool.
That main bad guy was also a neat character with cool smoke effects.
The song was KICK ASS as well and it almost seem slike this is the last one with the "and then there were none" at the end.
Well done on this entry.
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I like this game's idea behind it. I think more levels, some bonuses, maybe the ability to collect more bubbles along the way to extend life would be cool additions.
Also, on one level, I scored thru the zone and on teh next level when it came up it popped 3 of my bubbles. =(
I had fun and beat it score of 2.
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Well, it was alright, but the sticks were so fat that it made it tough to tell what actions they were executing. They also looked a bit like bobble heads.
Anyway, it was really short and the ending, though different, was pretty lame. It could have used some more thought for sure.
Also, the blue guy when he was standing there, had a huge graphical error and we could "see thru" his crotch area (not that I was LOOKING... hehe).
Anyway, keep working on it and best of luck.
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